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Ask a manager for a training course
Hi there, could you please review my letter with regard to asking a manager for a training class? There are 180 words in this writing, I appreciate your help very much!===============================
Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1.Describe the training course you want to do
2.Explain what the company could do to help you
3.Say how the course will be useful for your job
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Dear Manager,
I am writing [to you] about a training course which was posted on an advertisement on 17th Dec. 2016 from ABC Tech Magazine, (?I believe this training course benefits from us.?)**
The training course contains Big Data solutions, and how to design applications on/for? the cloud service. Also, it is only held once per year by Tech Magazine.
The training course will be held between 2-5pm every Wednesday, and the course fee is $1200. This comprises 10 series of classes during a 3 month period. I ask that the company gives me paid leave and pays the course fee.
According to the Internet, these cloud services are becoming universal, and ever more servers are responsible for storing ever more data. Until then, our databases will not be large enough to store this huge data under our storage infrastructure. Therefore, if you could assist me in joining the course, I believe these functions will integrally improve very much the load balancing of servers. Thank you for your consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Best Regards,
Salus
*I think your parenthesised version says the opposite of what you mean. 'I believe this training course will benefit us' is better.
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Very well written!
Ask a manager for a training course
Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1.Describe the training course you want to do
2.Explain what the company could do to help you
3.Say how the course will be useful for your job
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Dear Manager,
I am writing to you about a training course which was posted on an advertisement board on 17th Dec. 2016 from ABC Tech Magazine, I believe this training course will benefits from us not only me but the company as well.
Advertisement: a notice or announcement in a public medium promoting a product, service, or event or publicising a job vacancy.
The training course contains advice on Big Data solutions, and how to design applications on the cloud service. Besides In addition, it is only held once a per year by Tech Magazine.
According to Internet services are getting becoming universal, and the thus more and more servers are responsible for storing tremendous amounts of data as much as it can. Until then Shortly, our databases data centres will be not have enough disk space to store the huge amounts of data under this infrastructure. Therefore, if you could sponsor assist me in joining the course, I believe I will gain the expertise to solve many of our Big Data such as: these functions will integrally improving the load balancing of servers, (give another point) and (give another point).
The training course will be held every afternoon from 2-5 pm on every Wednesday per week, and the fee of the course costs $1200 with 10 series of classes lasting for 3 months long. I would like to ask for a help about the company could give me a paid personal leave and support funding me for the course premium.
Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you,
Best Regards,
Salus
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