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Why am I here ? This is my very first time writing in this website. The reason why I came right here right now is because of an exam I passed on my Comprehension And Writing Expression module; I am an English Foreign Language Learner, but the grade didn't satisfy me, I know I can write better than I did that day and I just need a little help. My biggest problem is actually the lack of ideas when I am facing an exam paper. I hope this website will help me improve my writing. Thank you for reading me, I will submit other more formal paragraphs in the future.

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Good job! You're doing great. "The Accidental Creative" by Todd Henry is a great book for tools to not creatively burn out.
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Why am I here?

This is my very first time writing on this website.

The reason why I'm writing here right now is because of an exam I passed on my comprehension and written expression module. I am an English Foreign Language Learner, but the grade didn't satisfy me. I know I can write better than I did that day; and I just need a little help.

My biggest problem is actually the lack of ideas when I am facing an exam paper. I hope this website will help me improve my writing.

Thank you for reading this. I will submit other more formal paragraphs in the future.

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Why am I here ?

This is my very first time writing in this website. The reason why I came right here right now is because of an exam I passed on my Comprehension And Writing Expression module; I am an English Foreign Language Learner, but the grade didn't satisfy me, I know I can write better than I did that day and I just need a little help. My biggest problem is actually the lack of ideas when I am facing an exam paper. I hope this website will help me improve my writing.
Thank you for reading me, I will submit other more formal paragraphs in the future.

This is first time that I have written on this website,  The reason that I am here is that I didn't like the grade that I got on my Comprehension and Writing Expression module. I know that I can write better than I did that day and I just need a little help. My biggest problem is that I have a lack of ideas when I am facing an exam paper.  I am hoping that this website will help me improve my writing.  Thank you for reading my entry. I will submit other more formal paragraphs in the future. 

(You've done very well in your example.This is another way in which it could have been written.)

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Everyone is short on ideas come exam time, not only English learners.
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Thank you very much Theresa. Your words are giving me a boost of self-confidence right now.

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