Please correct my 2 little stories:)
How can I forget a big castle in Mucachevo wich me and my husband have visited last year. The castle located at the top of hill, was blown by wind from all sides. When I stood on the balcony of the castle and looked at the river wich flowed around one, I thought about that lone prince who lived here 480 years ago and felt sorry for his loneliness...
"There is the city, wich I see in my dreams..." - words of the famous Odessa's song remineds about beauty and happiness of this city. As far as the eye can see there are the laughing and hunny people, the beautiful architecture and sunny weather everytime. Near the city centre there is a nice beach with gold, burning sand and salty sea smell.
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Please correct my 2 little stories:)
How can I forget a big castle in Mucachevo wich me and my husband have visited last year. The castle located at the top of hill, was blown by wind from all sides. When I stood on the balcony of the castle and looked at the river wich flowed around one, I thought about that lone prince who lived here 480 years ago and felt sorry for his loneliness..."There is the city, wich I see in my dreams..." - words of the famous Odessa's song remineds about beauty and happiness of this city. As far as the eye can see there are the laughing and hunny people, the beautiful architecture and sunny weather everytime. Near the city centre there is a nice beach with gold, burning sand and salty sea smell.
How can I forget a big castle in Mucachevo, which my husband and I visited last year. The castle is located on top of the hill and is wind blown from all sides. When I stood on the balcony of the castle and looked at the river, which flows all around it, I thought about a lonely prince who lived there 480 years ago and felt sorry for his loneliness.
"There is the city, which I see in my dreams...." Words of the famous Odessa song reminds me about the beauty and happiness of this city. As far as the eye can see, there are laughing and happy people, the architecture is beautiful and the weather is always sunny. Near the city center, there is a nice beach with golden, burning hot sand and a salty sea smell.
(This could have been written many way, here is my example.)
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Please correct my 2 little stories:)
How can I forget the big castle in Mucachevo which my husband and I visited last year? The castle, located at the top of a hill, was blown by wind from all sides. When I stood on the balcony of the castle and looked at the river which flowed around me, I thought about that lone prince who lived here 480 years ago and felt sorry for his loneliness..."There is the city, which I see in my dreams..." - words of the famous song from Odessa reminds me of the beauty and happiness of this city. As far as the eye can see there are the laughing and funny people, the beautiful architecture and sunny weather all year round. Near the city centre there is a nice beach with gold, burning sand and the smell of the salty sea.
Very poetic, I liked it!
Chris
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