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A frightening or exciting experience you have had
I always dreamed about having a dog but my mum never would let me have one. One day my mother's friend had to go to other country and he asked me to care his dog. I was very happy and I'd cared this dog for 6 months. I loved this dog like my own and I forgot that it wasn't mine. After 6 months my mother's friend came back and I had to give back him this dog. I felt my heart was broken and I missed him a lot. When I was 16 years old my mum took me to animal sanctuary and she let me choose a dog. I decided to adopt identical dog that was identical to the one I've cared it, I mean It was a red, small and fat dog. But every dog that was like this was very aggressive for me. I saw every dog in this place and I told that there wasn't any dog for me and I told we would find it on Internet. At the last time had gone a volunteer to tell me that I hadn't seen the last dogs. He took me to see a mother dog mother with a few puppies. I didn't want adopt one of this puppies because any wasn't no dogs were similar to the one I like I wanted. That moment this man put one dog on my arm to show me it. I was angry because I didn't want adopt a black dog and I told him to carry away him. This dog sank his nails so strong even I bled. A volunteer, director of animal sanctuary and my mum would take off this dog from my arm but it hurt me so much. I couldn't endure it so I told that I would adopt this dog. I came back with this dog to my house and I could take off him after 3 hours. I've have this dog for 10 years and decision to adopt him was the better in my life. Hercules is black not red, is big not small that I would but he is the most beautiful, smart and lovely dog on the world.Thanks! If you have any question, please comment to let me know!
A frightening or exciting experience you have had
I always dreamed about having a dog but my mum would never let me have one. One day my mother's friend had to go to another country and he asked me to care for his dog. I was very happy and I cared for this dog for 6 months. I loved this dog like my own and I forgot that it wasn't mine. After 6 months my mother's friend came back and I had to give back him this dog. I felt my heart was broken and I missed him a lot.When I was 16 years old my mum took me to the animal sanctuary and she let me choose a dog. I decided to adopt a similar dog* that to the previous; red, small and fat. But every dog that was like this was very aggressive towards me. I saw every dog there and I was told that if there wasn't the right dog there for me that I could find it on the internet.
The last time I went to the sanctuary, a volunteer asked me to look at the latest dogs. He took me to see a bitch with her puppies. I didn't want to adopt one of these because they were not like the one I wanted. Then, this man put one dog in my arms to show me it. I was angry because I didn't want to adopt a black dog and I told him to carry it away. This dog sank his nails so strong into me that I even bled. A volunteer, the director of the sanctuary and my mum wanted to take off this dog from my arm but it hurt me so much. I couldn't endure it so I said that I would adopt this dog. I returned home with this dog and removed him from my arm 3 hours later(!!??). I have had this dog now for 10 years and the decision to adopt him was the right one. Hercules is black not red, is big not small. But he is the most beautiful, smart and loveliest dog on the world.
*an identical actor to Morgan Freeman is the actor who starred in all these films: Deep Impact, The Shawshank Redemption. Born 1 June, 1937... ie. there is only one actor identical to MF; himself.
Very well written! Hercules was certainly smart to fix himself to your arm for 3 hours.
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