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How I spent my time today Today I spent my day as always. I woke up at 7 a.m. in morning. I couldnt get out of bed because it was cold in my room. Eventually, I got up at 8 a.m. As I have to be at work at 9:30. I started putting my clothes on, having breakfast. While I did all these morning's things, I was listening the movie "Love, rosie" in order to understand english more better. By the way, this movies is amazing, you should watch it one day. When I saw at the clock, it was already 8:40. I took my computer and bag, and then, I got out of my house. It takes 15 minutes to arrive to bus stop. When I arrived to bus stop there were many people who were waiting for a bus. Fortunately, most people were waiting for not my bus :D. In 10 minutes, The bus I was waiting for, came. It took 30 minutes to get to my office. When I came to office, I realized that I want to eat something sweet. there is a small store near my office so went to the store and bought russian chocolate. During the day, I was translating biography of russian painters into korean. Because I am tour-quide. and I am currently preparing to next season of tourists. But I couldnt translate longer because you have to be really focus on words and of meaning of sentence which you make. I got ouf the office at 6 p.m. And walked to bus stop. I got a bus and went home. All people go home at this time so it is a big traffic on the road. I came home in hour. during having supper I was watching a movie in english and then I started practising english pronunciation by american teacher's videos on youtube. And now I am writting this essay ... I am going to write the same thing in korean.

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Today I spent my day as always. I woke up at 7 a.m. in the morning. I couldn't get out of bed because it was cold in my room. Eventually, I got up at 8 a.m. As I have to be at work at 9:30.,I started putting my clothes on while having breakfast. While I did all these I was watching the movie "Love, Rosie" in order to understand English better. By the way, this movie is amazing; you should watch it someday.
When I looked at the clock, it was already 8:40. I took my computer and bag, and got out of my house. It takes 15 minutes to arrive to the bus stop. When I arrived there were many people who were waiting for a bus. Fortunately, most people were not waiting for my bus :D. In 10 minutes, the bus, I was waiting for, came. It took 30 minutes to get to my office. When I reached office, I realized that I wanted to eat something sweet. There is a small store nearby so I went to the store and bought some Russian chocolate. During the day, I was translating a biography of Russian painters into Korean, because I am a tour guide and am currently preparing for the next season of tourists. But I couldn't translate any longer because you have to be really focused on words and on the meaning of the sentences which you make.
I got out of the office at 6 p.m and walked to bus stop. I got a bus and went home. All people go home at this time so there is huge traffic on the road. I came home in an hour. During supper I was watching a movie in English and then I started practising English pronunciation with American teachers' videos on Youtube. And now I am writing this essay.
I am now going to write the same thing in Korean.
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How I Spent My Time Today

Today I spent my day the usual way. I woke up at 7 in the morning. I couldn't get out of bed because it was cold in my room. Eventually, I got up at 8 a.m. I have to be at work at 9:30, so I started putting my clothes on, and then I had breakfast. While I was doing all these morning's things, I was listening to the movie "Love, Rosie" in order to understand English_better. By the way, this movie is amazing, you should watch it one day.
When I looked at at the clock, it was already 8:40. I took my computer and bag, and then I went out of my house. It takes me 15 minutes to get to the bus stop. When I arrived, _there were many people _waiting for a bus. Fortunately, most people were not waiting for my bus :D. 10 minutes later, the bus I was waiting for came. It took me 30 minutes to get to my office. As I was coming into my office, I realized that I wanted to eat something sweet. There is a small store near my office, so I went there and bought some Russian chocolate. During the day, I was translating biographies of Russian painters into Korean. I am a tour-quide and I am currently preparing the next season for tourists, but I couldn't translate more because you have to be really focused on the words and the meaning of the sentences which you are translating.
I left the office at 6 p.m., and walked to the bus stop. I took the bus and went home. Everybody goes home at this time, so there was a lot of traffic on the road. I came home an hour later. While having supper I was watching a movie in English and then I started practising English pronunciation with an American teacher's videos on youtube. And now I am writing this essay ...
I am going to write the same thing in Korean.  :)
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3 line instead of having you must write had. Learn difference between (. and , ) it really matters. By the way nice try.... All the best.

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