Search from various English teachers...
China flagcherry
TDo you know what people wear in winter in my city? I live in the northeast of China . So it is very chilly in winter in my hometown. The temperature is usually under zero degree. Now the temperature outside is minus 17 degrees. Tonight it will be minus 25 degrees. You can imagine how cold it is. This morning I took an English lesson , my teach talked about the topic about what people wear in winter. In this class I learned some new words about clothing. This is why I want to introduce about what people usually wear in winter in my hometown. Because of the cold weather, in my hometown most people usually wear thick down coats or down jackets , and cotton-padded pants. In addition to , we wear fur shoes , scarfs and wear gloves and hats No matter men or women , young or old. People have to wrap them up to keep warm. Sometimes we wear respirators to keep from cold. With the enhancement of living standard, some people purchase expensive mink coats to wear in winter . They think that wearing mink coats makes them look like more dignified and grace . Yes, sometimes it does work. But not everyone can afford it . For ordinary people , I think it has a good "news" , that is the clothing is getting more and more fashion and colorful. So people can have much more choices. They can doll themselves up and don't need to spend a lot of money. With the development of science and technology , the clothing is made more and more thiner. In the past , we need to wear sweaters made out of wool inside the down coats , however nowadays some high-tech thermals are invented and produced, people also can only wear these thermals under their shirts and pants inside down coats. Some young people like them a lot . Even though when they wear like this , they still feel a little cold , but it makes them look like more beautiful . Although winter is long and chilly , people still manage to dress up beautifully.

Corrections · 5

0

TDo you know what people wear in winter in my city?

I live in the northeast of China . So it is very chilly in winter in my hometown . The temperature is usually below zero degree. Now the temperature outside is minus 17 degrees. Tonight, it will be minus 25 degrees. You can imagine how cold it is.
This morning I took an English lesson , today's topic was clothing, my teacher  told me talked about what people wear in wintertime. In this class, I learned some new words about clothing. This is why I want to introduce some of the words I have learned and tell you what people usually wear in winter in my hometown.
Because of the cold weather, in my hometown most people usually wear thick down coats or down jackets , and cotton-padded pants. In addition to somthething Additionally, we wear fur shoes , scarfs and wear gloves and hats,  no matter if you are men or women , young or old. People have to wrap themselves up to keep warm. Sometimes we wear respirators to keep from cold.
With the enhancement of living standard, some people purchase expensive mink coats to wear in winter . They think that wearing mink coats makes them look like more dignified and graceful . Yes, sometimes it does work. But not everyone can afford it . For ordinary people , I think there are a good "news" , that is, the clothing is getting more colorful and natural furs are less fashionable. Now people can have much more choices. They can doll themselves up and don't need to spend a lot of money.( Doll up, nice way to put it :D)
With the development of science and technology , the clothing is made more and more thinner and thinner. In the past , we had/needed to wear sweaters made out of wool underneath the down coats , however nowadays some high-tech thermal fabrics(maybe better) are invented and produced, and people can only wear these thermals under their shirts, pants and or as additional layer in their down coats. Some young people like them a lot . Even though, they still feel a little cold when, they prefer  to wear them because it makes them look like more beautiful .
Although winter is long and chilly , people still manage to dress up beautifully.

try not to use like unnecessary, you can often hear people use it incorrectly.. the correct use its only when comparing one thing to the other as "this is looks like that" "wearing these makes them look like chimpanzees"   

Very nice text :) 

0
I am grateful. Thank you very mcuh.
0
You are doing very well for a beginner. Write some more and if I happen to be online I will have a look :)
0
I am an English beginner, I try to write some compositions . Hope you help me to modify them, I would be grateful.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today