Could you please correcting my Introduction speech ?
So, the recruiter will give me 1-2min for describing my self, and here it is... my introduction speech.
Good morning Madame, good morning mister, good morning ladies..
My name Rosiana Aviandari, i'm 24years old. I already graduated from Binus University in 2013 majoring Management Economic. Previously i worked for Telkomsel as Customer service and also have experiences as a Greeter. I want to becoming a cabin crew because i want to improve my customer services skills and challenge my self by learning new things like fist aid emergency procedure, aviation, and culture diversity. I think that's all about me, Thank you for the time. Good morning
Feel free to correcting my mistakes. Thank you very much :)
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Could you please correcting my Introduction speech ?
So, the recruiter will give me 1-2min for describing my self, and here it is... my introduction speech.Good morning Madame, good morning mister, good morning ladies..
My name Rosiana Aviandari, i'm 24 years old. I already graduated from Binus University in 2013 majoring Management Economic. Previously i worked for Telkomsel as Customer service and also have experiences as a Greeter. I want to becoming a cabin crew because i want to improve my customer services skills and challenge myself by learning new things like such as; fist aid emergency procedure, aviation, and culture diversity. I think that's all about me, Thank you for the your time. Good morning Do you mean goodbye?
Feel free to correcting my mistakes. Thank you very much :)
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Good morning ladies and gentlemen.
Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Rosiana Aviandari. I'm 24 years old. I graduated from Binus University majoring in Management Economics in 2013. Previously, i worked for Telkomsel which is a mobile phone network company as a customer service employee. I also have some experience as a Greeter(?). I'd like to become a cabin crew( or maybe you mean stewardess?) because of some reasons. First of all I'd like to improve my customer service skills. I'm also willing to challenge myself by learning new things such as first aid emergency procedures, aviation, and culture diversity. I think that's all about me. I hope you can consider giving me the chance to apply for this job. Thank you.
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