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Vietnam flagNguyen Thanh Chuong
I love e- books, and you? I: Hello Hien, nice to meet you, long time no see, what are you doing? Hien: Oh Chuong, please to meet you too. I’m finding a book about adventure. Because I will travel to Japan next week. I and my friends will climb Mount Fuji which is the highest moutain in Japan I: Mount Fuji, I really impressive about it. I used to visit this mountain, Mount Fuji lies about 100 kilometres south-West of Tokyo and can be seen from there on a clear day, It’s exceptionally symmetrical cone, which is snow-cappped several months a year.But why don’t you search on the internet, have a lot of information and images useful for you. You can get hotels, good food and many beautiful gifts Hien: I have read may books about journey to the land of the rising sun but I still want to read the paper books. I will carry it during my journey I: It’s good idea, I will find the book with you together Hien: Thanks a lot,Do you like paper books? I : Not Really, I like e-books, I can stay at home but I can read everything what I want Hien: I used to read e-books but I can’t focus on annything, E-books can effect my eyes So now I don’t like reading paper books Chuong: Nowadays, we should read paper books because it’s convenient Hien: You could be right but I just like reading paper books. Oh, It’s here. I just found it, I must go to work, See you again, Bye Chuong: Ok, Bye

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I love e- books, and you?

I: Hello Hien, nice to meet you, long time no see, what are you doing?
Hien: Oh Chuong, please to meet you too. I’m finding a book about adventures, because I will travel to Japan next week. I and my friends will climb Mount Fuji which is the highest moutain in Japan.
I: Mount Fuji? I am really impressed by it. I used to visit this mountain, Mount Fuji lies about 100 kilometres south-West of Tokyo and can be seen from there on a clear day, it’s exceptionally symmetrical cone, which is snow-cappped several months a year. But why don’t you search on the internet?  There are a lot of informations and images which are useful for you. You can get hotels, good food and many beautiful gifts.
Hien: I have read many books about journeys to the land of the rising sun but I still want to read the paper books. I will carry it during my journey.
I: It’s a good idea, I will find the book with you together.
Hien: Thanks a lot. Do you like paper books?
I : Not really, I like e-books more, I can't stay at home but I can read everything what I want
Hien: I used to read e-books but I can’t focus on anything. E-books can be affected my eyes. So now I don’t like reading paper books
Chuong: Nowadays, we should read paper books because it’s convenient
Hien: You could may be right but I just like reading paper books. Oh, It’s here. I have just found it, I must go to work, see you again. Bye
Chuong: Ok, Bye.

Note: Mr Chương viết câu nên chú ý viết hoa hay chấm câu hợp lí nhé. Ngoài ra thêm lỗi về nội dung: Hiền thích paper books, sao câu cuối Chương lại nói  nên đọc paper books. Đoạn này có vấn đề nhé. 

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