Diary Entry for December 14th
Today I suddenly received a wedding invitation from one of my high school classmates. I was so surprised no only because she will get married but also she invited me. We haven't reunited for five years ever since we graduated from high school.
Moreover，she asked me if I would like to be her bridesmaid. Wow！I have never been a bridesmaid. But just for the reason I felt a few worried. I didn't know if the bridesmaid needs to help the bride to block wine. If it is，I am afraid that I am not capable of doing that.
Anyway，it was a pleasure to receive a invitation indeed！
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Diary Entry for December 14th
Today I suddenly received a wedding invitation from one of my high school classmates. I was so surprised not only because she will get married but also because she invited me. We haven't reunited for five years, ever since we graduated from high school.Moreover，she asked me if I would like to be her bridesmaid. Wow! I have never been a bridesmaid. But just for that reason I felt a little worried. I didn't know if the bridesmaid needs to help the bride to block (?) wine. If it is，I am afraid that I am not capable of doing that.
Anyway，it was a pleasure to receive an invitation indeed！
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hhhhh thanks～
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Overall very good. Well written, and it seemed like it came from a native speaker.
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Diary Entry for December 14th
Today I suddenly received a wedding invitation from one of my high school classmates. I was so surprised, not only because she will get married, but also because she invited me. We haven't reunited for five years, ever since we graduated from high school.Moreover，she asked me if I would like to be her bridesmaid. Wow! I have never been a bridesmaid. But just for that reason, I felt a little worried. I didn't know if the bridesmaid would need to help the bride block wine. If it is，then I am afraid that I am not capable of doing that.
Anyway，it was a pleasure to receive a invitation indeed!
Edit: Nick noticed an error that I missed. I updated it with the new correction.
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