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6 post (Sixth post)
Not bad, but there are some mistakes that I think are just spelling. As well as some where the meaning might not be clear to you. You'll see the corrections below.
Hi, everyone. Today was a great day. Really. The weather was war (War means- A state of armed conflict between different states, nations, or groups of states and nations.) and snowy.
So, today I got up at 6.00 am. At first it was very lazy. Next I had breakfast, became a bit more fun then. The day I was a hospital (Hospital means- An institution providing medical and surgical treatment and nursing care for sick or injured people.), well of couse (Course) I gone (Went) to the gum (Gym).
In the afternoon I did some work in the office, and you know what? I noticed that the office is very boring. The whole day sitting at the computers and staring at their monitors. Office plankton (Plankton means- The small and microscopic organisms drifting or floating in the sea or fresh water.) doesn't talk much.
So , the evning (Evening) I drived (Drove) go (Remove this word) home. Well it was not there (What was not there? This sentence doesn't contain enough detail for the reader to derive a conclusion from it). Once again, it was a very big traffic jam on the way home.
When, got go home,I (When I got home, I) waited for a delicious dinner. I was happy.
Before bed I usually take a shower and brush my teeth.
Good night, my Friends.
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