Translation 3
据报道，今年中国快递服务将递送大约120亿件包裹。这将使中国有可能超越美国成为世界上最大的快递市场。大多数包裹里装着网上订购的物品。中国给数百万在线零售商以极具竞争力的价格销售商品的机会。仅在11月11日，中国消费者就从国内最大的购物平台购买了价值90亿美元的商品。中国有不少这样的特殊购物日。因此，快递业在中国扩展就不足为奇了。
It's reported that about 12 billion package will be passed by Chinese courier services this year. This may make China be the biggest courier mall in the world. Goods ordered on line are in the most of the packages. China has given the opportunity for several million of retailers to sell goods at very competive prices. Only at Nov.11th, Chineses customers have bought 9 billion dollars of goods on the biggest shopping platform in the domestic. There are many special shopping days in China like this. Therefore, it's no wonder for the extension of courier industry in China.
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Translation 3
It's reported that about 12 billion packages will be delivered by Chinese courier services this year. This may make China become the biggest courier market in the world.* Most of the packages contain goods that were ordered online. China has given several million of retailers the opportunity to sell their goods at very competitive prices. On November 11 alone, Chinese customers have bought 9 billion dollars worth of goods on the country's largest domestic/local shopping platform. There are many special shopping days in China like this.** Therefore, it's no wonder the expansion/development of the courier industry in China has occurred to such an extent.****I think the Chinese sentence better translates to: 'This will possibly allow China to surpass the US as the world's largest express delivery market.'
**You might need to mention 11月11日 is a special sales day in China first.
***Alternatively you can say, 'Therefore, this (rapid) development of the courier industry in China has come to no surprise.'
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