I plan to go abroad to have my further study
I probable want to Australia. in my mind,Australia has the most beautiful coastline,and a lot of interest. After i study hard,i can relax myself on beach.I love beautiful country.Of course, not just for this reason, the most important reason for me is to study English. So i can study well and to know this country with lots of culture.
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I plan to go abroad to further my studies.
I probably want to go to Australia. In my mind, Australia has the most beautiful coastline, and a lot of interesting places to visit. After studying hard, I can relax myself on the beach and enjoy the I love beautiful scenery. Of course, not just only for that that's not the only reason, the most important reason for me is to study English. So i can I would like to study well and get to know this country with lots of and its culture.[please change it for me]
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sorry ，I will notice this.
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Let me try
当你结束一个句子，开始另一个-最后一个词-没有空间-充分的停止空间-第一个字（与大写字母）
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我不明白
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Hi, there are a lot of really simple mistakes, especially your punctuation. I is always a capital letter. When you end one sentence and start another -
last word - no space - full stop - space - First word (with a capital letter)
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