Any corrections please. An interview about English assistant Yesterday, I went to school to take part in a job fair. There were about ten education institutions to offer one hundred positions almostly

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Any corrections please. An interview about English assistant Yesterday, I went to school to take part in a job fair. There were about ten education institutions to offer one hundred positions almostly. I went around the job fairs/ made a slow circuit of the place and finally found an education institution which recruited 3 English assistant. Established by an old foreign teacher, the institution named "Tictoc", which services for children of 3-15 years old to learn English in English-only environment. With a strong interested in it , I choose it as my first interviewer. I was a little bit excited and nervous when I have to talk with the foreign boss face to face in English. What hitted me is that when he saw my name in the text paper, he laughed and told me that I speak my English name in wrong pronunciation, it is "Zoe", not "Joy". I was embrassed but it is ok, because at least I knew well about what he said to me in the latter ten minutes, although I couldn't answer his questions in second. As a result, I was fail to get the job. And they called me to work as a course consultant for the institution. I was too hesitant to make a desicion about to be a CC. At last, to the wrong time so I missed the chance to be a CC. I just want to be a girl who could speak fluent and standard English. Thanks for reading~

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Any corrections please. An interview for the job of English assistant

Yesterday, I went to school to take part in a job fair. There were about ten educational institutions offering about one hundred positions.
I went around the job stalls making a slow circuit of the place and finally found an educational institution which recruited 3 English assistants. Established by an old foreign teacher, the institution, "Tictoc", teaches 3-15 year-olds English in an English-only environment. With a strong interest in it , I choose it as my first interview.
I was a little bit excited and nervous when I had to talk with the foreign boss face to face in English. What hit me is that when he saw my name written on my badge, he laughed and told me that I mispronounced my English. It is "Zoe", not "Joy". I was embarrassed but that was ok, because at least I understood what he said to me then and in the next ten minutes, although I couldn't answer his questions as quickly.
As a result, I failed to get the job??. And they called me to work as a Course Consultant for the institution??. I was too hesitant to decide to be a CC.
At last, dawdling too much, I missed the chance to become a CC.
I just want to be a girl who can speak fluent and standard English.
Thanks for reading~

Very well written!

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Any corrections, please. An interview to get an English assistant job position

Yesterday, I went to school to take part in a job fair. There were about ten education institutions to offer one hundred positions almost.
I went around the job fairs/ made a slow circuit of the place and finally found an education institution which recruited 3 English assistants. Established by an old foreign teacher, the institution named "Tictoc", which services for children of 3-15 years old to learn English in English-only environment. With a strong interested in it , I choose it as my first interviewer.
I was a little bit excited and nervous when I have to talk with the foreign boss face to face in English. What hit me is that when he saw my name in the text paper, he laughed and told me that I speak my English name in wrong pronunciation, it is "Zoe", not "Joy". I was embarrassed but it is ok because at least I knew well about what he said to me in the latter ten minutes, although I couldn't answer his questions in second.
As a result, I failed to get the job. And they called me to work as a course consultant for the institution. I was too hesitant to make a decision about to be a CC.
At last, to the wrong time so I missed the chance to be a CC.
I just want to be a girl who could speak fluent and standard English.
Thanks for reading~

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