favorite shop
May be when talk to favorite shop i will think to souvenir shop.because i really like smal giffs and cute.
there are alot of reasons that i like it.
the first, staff in here very friendly.when i come here i dont customer seem as close friend .each of come ms boss store advisori new things which entered here store new.when i go back owner store are given me a small giff.therefore,the more i like to come here more.
second i like shopping.especialy is giffs souvenir.for example, bears,dools,bracelet,necklace...viturally,free time i often come here.when i look at it i fell comfortale and reduce stress.
that is place i come when i fell tired.and you?
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My Favorite Shop
May be When I am asked about to my favorite shop I will think of to the souvenir shop, because I really like small and cute gifts [and cute].There are a lot of reasons that I like it.
The first, staff [in] here are very friendly. When I come here I don't seem to be a customer [seem as] but a close friend, and each time of I come ms boss the owner of the store tells/advises me about new things which have arrived entered (here) at/in the store new. When I go back [the owner store] are (s)he givesn me a small gift therefore/so the more I like to come here [more].
Second, I like shopping, especially is for gifts and souvenirs, for example, teddy bears,dolls, bracelet, necklace…[viturally,] in my free time I often come here, and when I look at it I feel comfortable and it reduces stress.
This is the place I come when I feel tired, and you?
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My favorite shop
May be When talking/mentioning about a favorite shop immediately I will think of souvenir shops because i really like small and cute gifts and cute.there are a lot of reasons why I like it.
Firstly, the staff in here are very friendly.when i come here i dont customer seem as close friend .each of come ms boss store advisori new things which entered here store new.when i go back owner store are given me a small giff.
Đoạn đầu tiên đó, em nói rằng em thích quán bán đồ lưu niệm. Và điều đó khiến mọi người nghĩ rằng em đang đứng trên phương diện khách hàng. sau đó em lại nhắc đến boss??? Là sao??? Thật là khó hiểu. Em có thể viết lại câu c gạch bằng tiếng Việt được không?
therefore,the more i like to come here more.
secondly, i like shopping.especialy buying souvenirs.for example, such as teddies ,dools,bracelet,necklace...viturally, in my free time i often come here.when i look at them i feel comfortable and reduce not stressful any more .
that is the place i come when i feel tired.and you?
Bài của em có một số lỗi sai về ngữ pháp mà em rất cần phải chỉnh sửa ngay nếu muốn nói một thừ tiếng anh xịn Thảo ạ.
Thứ 2 là, em hãy để ý đến từng chữ cái đầu dòng phải viết hoa, đến dấu chấm câu, nói chung là để ý những chính tả nhỏ nhất: cách từ, dấu chấm dấu phẩy.. Những lỗi chính tả và dấu câu nhỏ nhất còn không tự sửa được, thì rất khó có thể tiến bộ về lâu về dài. i : tôi là I hoa nhé.
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favorite shop
May be when talk toGenerally, speaking of favorite shop, i will think to souvenir shop is always my first priority because i really like / have a deep love for smal giffs and cute small and cute gifts.there are a lot of reasons that i like it.
the first, the staff in here is so friendly that I feel we are intimated friends for a long time. when i come here i dont customer seem as close friend .each of come ms boss store advisori new things which entered here store new.when i go back come back I am always given a small gift owner store are given me a small giff.therefore,the more i like to come here more.
second, i like shopping.especialy is giffs souvenir souvernir gifts.for example such as bears,dolls,bracelet,necklace...viturally,free time i often come here.when i look at it i fell comfortale and reduce stress.
that is place i come when i fell tiredand you?
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Generally, speaking of the favorite shop, souvenir shop is always my first priority to come and recommend for others.
First of all, I am really impressed by the staff here. They are so friendly and enthusiastic that I have no worry about anything. For example, when I am uncertain about price or present items, they are willing to give reasonable answer with good attitude. Occasionally, I am honoured to receive special gifts for the long- term customer by them. These actually satisfies and encourages me to come here many times.
Besides, this shop sells an array of gifts, handmade crafts such as jewellery, ornaments, wooden toys,..therefore I have many selections for my own gifts without any consideration. The price is also affordable with a freshman who is always on tight budget like me.
That is the place I often come and recommend for others. And you?
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