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First time to travel abroud. My first time to travel abroad was to France when I was a student. It was school trip for studying baking. At the time, I was studying baking and there are some of the most famous patisseries in France. I was extremely excited, because I thought I could have fantastic experiences there. I actually did, but some of things were different as I expected. I went to a suburb which was 2 hours away from Paris by train. I had thought there was nothing special. However, there was definitly something special. I really loved the calm atmosphere and beautiful sceneries. I enjoyed these a lot, even though I wasn't crazy about food I've had there. Moreover I had thought a city was better than a suburb. Eventually I absolutely loved the town more than a city.

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First time to travel abroud.

My first time to travel trip abroad was to France when I was a student. It was a school trip for studying baking. At the time, I was studying baking and there are(were) some of the most famous patisseries in France France had some of the most famous patisseries. I was extremely excited, because I thought I could would have a fantastic experiences experience there. I actually did, but some of the things were different as from what I expected.  u could also say ".. some of the things were not as I expected."

I went to a lived in the suburbs which was 2 hours away from Paris by train. I had thought there was would be nothing special. However, there was definitly something special.It's not grammatically wrong but it felt repetitive, u could probably just say "But I turned out to be wrong" I really loved the calm atmosphere and the beautiful sceneries. I enjoyed these a lot, even though I wasn't crazy about the food I've had there. Moreover I had thought a city was better than a suburb. Eventually I absolutely loved the town more than a  the city.
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First time to travel abroud.

My first time to travel abroad was to France when I was a student. It was school trip for studying baking. At the time, I was studying baking and there are some of the most famous patisseries in France. I was extremely excited, because I thought I could have fantastic experiences there. I actually did, but some of things were different as from what I expected.

I went to a suburb which was 2 hours away from Paris by train. I had thought there was would be nothing special there. However, there was definitly something special. I really loved the calm atmosphere and beautiful scenery.sceneries. I enjoyed these a lot, even though I wasn't crazy about the food I've had there. Moreover, I had thought a city was would be better than a suburb. Eventually, I absolutely loved the town more than a city.

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