The Stranger. Part 3. Please, correct my mistakes.
They were walking amongthe ancient City till the sunset came. Damien wanted to leave this place as soon as possible. He couldn't wait the time when they return to the Island. Now it was the only place where he wanted to be.
"So, what will be when we find this man?" Damien asked.
"I hope he would help us to get back." Lisa answered.
""What will we be faced then?
"Struggle. That will be only struggle. I hope they still hold their positions. Otherwise we risk to return to the red painted ground."
"Don't think about that. We'll be fighting until they're blown away..."
"I like your will, Damien, but the reality is often worse than we want to see... Other words we should be careful" Lisa said.
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The Stranger. Part 3. Please, correct my mistakes.
They were walking amongthe ancient City till the sunset came. Damien wanted to leave this place as soon as possible. He couldn't wait the time when they return to the Island. Now it was the only place where he wanted to be."So, what will be when we find this man?" Damien asked.
"I hope he would help us to get back." Lisa answered.
""What will we be faced then?
"Struggle. That will be only struggle. I hope they still hold their positions. Otherwise we risk to return to the red painted ground."
"Don't think about that. We'll be fighting until they're blown away..."
"I like your will, Damien, but the reality is often worse than we want to see... Other words we should be careful" Lisa said.(
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They were walking amongst the ancient city until sunrise. Damien wanted to leave this place as soon as possible. He couldn't wait to return to the island. It was the only place he wanted to be now.
"So, what will happen when we find this man?" Damien asked.
"I'm hoping he will help us find our way back," Lisa answered.
"What will happen then?"
"Struggle, there will only be the struggle. I hope the others will hold their positions. Otherwise, we will have to risk the travel to the red painted ground."
"Don't think about that. We will be fighting until they're blown away..."
"I like your will Damien, but reality is worse than what we see. In other words, we should be careful." Lisa said.
*I hope I didn't change the story!
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