My first dog!
I met my first dog a long time ago when I was child. On my six birthday, I received a present that I very interested from my mother. It was "Lu", that was a doggie, masculine gender so lovely and he had beautiful black hair. I was really glad and happy. I take care of "Lu" carefully. "Lu" was very close to me. Everyday when I came home from school, He will run out quickly to welcome me. He ran very fast. In my free time, I often play with him in yard, I'm running to him chasing me. "Lu" grew very fast and become intelligent and strong dog. Do you know? My saddest day, that was "Lu" leaved me. I cried a lot when "Lu" live were lost.
"Lu" is my happy memories of childhood.
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My first dog!
I met my first dog a long time ago when I was child. On my sixth birthday, [I received a present that I very interested from my mother](Sorry, this past sentence makes no sense). It was "Lu", that was a doggie, masculine gender so lovely and he had beautiful black hair. I was really glad and happy. I take care of Lu carefully. Lu was very close to me. Everyday when I came home from school, He will would run out quickly to welcome me. He ran very fast. In my free time, I often played with him in my yard, I'm running to from him chasing me. Lu grew very fast and became an intelligent and strong dog. Do Did you know? My saddest day, that was when "Lu" leaved left me. I cried a lot when Lu's life was lost.Lu is my happy childhood memories of childhood.
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My first dog!
I met my first dog a long time ago when I was a child. On my sixth birthday, I received a present which I was very interested in from my mother. It was "Lu", that was a doggie, masculine gender so lovely He was a lovely doggie whose name was Lu. And he had beautiful black hair. I was really glad and happy. I took care of "Lu" carefully. "Lu" was very close to me. Everyday when I came home from school, he would run out quickly to welcome me. He ran very fast. In my free time, I often played with him in yard, he ran after and chased me. I'm running to him chasing me. "Lu" grew very fast and became an intelligent and strong dog. Do you know? On My saddest day, when Lu left me, I cried a lot. He got lost!"Lu" was my happy childhood memory.
Tên con Lu không cần cho vào ngoặc kép đâu Liam nhé <3
Con Lu đi mất thì là Lu got lost còn nếu con Lu chết thì đơn giản lắm, Lu died!
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My first dog!
I met my first dog a long time ago when I was child. On my six birthday, I received a present that I very interested from my mother. It was "Lu", that was a doggie, masculine gender so lovely and he had beautiful black hair. I was really glad and happy. I take care of "Lu" carefully. "Lu" was very close to me. Everyday when I came home from school, He will run out quickly to welcome me. He ran very fast. In my free time, I often play with him in yard, I'm running to him chasing me. "Lu" grew very fast and become intelligent and strong dog. Do Did you know? My saddest day, that was "Lu" leaved left (qúa khứ của leave ) me. I cried a lot when "Lu" live life were lost."Lu" is my happy memories of childhood.
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