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Kimono There is no samurai in my country Japan. The people who wear KIMONO(Japanese traditional clothes) routinely is few. This is admirable things for even Japanese. But for some reason, we wear kimono in fireworks festivals. Maybe all We should put on kimono in formal situations. For example, in office.

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Kimono

There are no more Samurais in Japan.
There are only a few people who wear the kimono (Japanese traditional clothes) on a regular basis.
For the Japanese, these are prestigious things. Yet for some reason, we only wear the kimono for firework festivals.
Maybe we should wear a kimono for other occasions as well. For example, in the office. 


Your text makes sense, but I feel that it may need a bit more elaboration to help make the point (if you did have a point to make)

Kimono

There are no more Samurais in Japan.
There are only a few people who wear the kimono (Japanese traditional clothes) on a regular basis.
For the Japanese, these are prestigious things. Yet for some reason, we only wear the kimono for firework festivals.
Maybe we should wear a kimono for other occasions as well. We can wear the kimono in the office for an important meeting, or even attend job interviews wearing a kimono.

We should be proud of the kimono!

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Kimono

There is are no samurai in my country Japan.
The people who wear KIMONO(Japanese traditional clothes) routinely is are few.
This is an admirable things for even Japanese. But for some reason, we wear kimono in at fireworks festivals.
Maybe all Wwe should all put on kimono in formal situations. For example, in the office.
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Kimono

There is no samurai in my country Japan.
The people who wear KIMONO(Japanese traditional clothes) routinely is few.
These things are  is admirable things for even for Japanese. But for some reason, we wear kimono in fireworks festivals.
Maybe we all We should put on kimono in formal occasions situations. For example, in the office.
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I love Japanese culture!
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Would you can tell me more about Firework festivals in Japan?

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