The woman in my heart
I will tell you about the woman who is important in my life. That is my mother. When I was a little boy, she always reminded me to learn hard. I used to be a person who was naughty. I usually absented oneself from school to go out and play games. I could spend a lot of time to chat with people whom I knew on the internet. Sometimes, I stolen these foods of my neighbourhood,my mother knew and cried very much. That made me so sad. She gave me two choices. The first one which was awful had to absent from school. The second one was I must to try my best to study well. Of course, my choice was the second. After that, I really became a person that everybody always have admired. I am grateful to my mother for her help. Now I am living in Ha Noi where is so far from my hometown but she always takes care of me and calls me everyday. I feel not alone. I love her so much. I wish she will be stronger and happy in her life
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The Woman in my Heart
I will tell you about the most important woman [who is important] in my life. That is my mother. When I was a little boy, she always reminded/pushed/pressed me to learn well/study hard. I used to be ( a person who was ) naughty. I usually missed* absented oneself from school to go out and play games. I spent/would spend a lot of time to chatting with people ( whom I knew ) on the internet. Sometimes, I stolen these foods of in my neighbourhood, my mother found out/[knew] and cried a lot very much. That made me so sad. She gave me two choices. The first one, which was awful, had was to absent from leave/stop going to school. The second one was that I must to try my best to study well. Of course, my choice was the second. After that, I really became a person that everyone/everybody always have admired. I am grateful to my mother for her help. Now I am living in Ha Noi, where (which is) so far from my hometown, but she always takes care of me, and calls me every day. I don't feel not alone. I love her so much. I [wish]/hope that she will be/stay/remain healthy/[strong]er and happy in her life.* or you can use the slang 'bunked off'
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The woman in my heart
I will tell you about the woman who is important in my life. That is my mother. When I was a little boy, she always reminded me to learn hard. I used to be a person who was naughty. I was usually absent oneself from school to go out and play games. I could spend a lot of time chatting with people whom I knew on the internet. Sometimes, I stole these food of my neighbourhood,my mother knew it and cried very much. That made me so sad. She gave me two choices. The first one which was awful is had to be absent from school. The second one was that I must to try my best to study well. Of course, my choice was the second. After that, I really became a person that everybody always have admired. I am grateful to my mother for her help. Now I am living in Ha Noi where is so far from my hometown but she always takes care of me and calls me everyday. I don't feel alone. I love her so much. I wish she will be stronger and happy in her life0
The woman in my heart
I will tell you about the woman who is important in my life. This is my mother. When I had been a little boy, she always reminded me to learn hard. I used to be a person who was naughty. I usually missed school to go out and play games. I could spend a lot of time to chat with people whom I knew on the internet. Sometimes, I stole those foods of my neighbourhood,my mother learned about it and cried very much. That made me so sad. She gave me two choices. The first one which seemed awful had to be absent from school. The second one was to try my best to study well. Of course, my choice was the second. After that, I really became a person whom everybody always admired. I am grateful to my mother for her help. Now I am living in Ha Noi which is so far from my hometown but she always takes care of me and calls me every day. I feel not alone. I love her so much. I wish her to be be stronger and happy in her life.Want to progress faster?
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