Could you please correct this text? Thanks Dear diary. Today it was a very nice day. In math we had to answer questions. But all questions were answered by me. After that, we had history. We were in t

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Could you please correct this text? Thanks Dear diary. Today it was a very nice day. In math we had to answer questions. But all questions were answered by me. After that, we had history. We were in the chrismas marked too. It was very beautiful with the candles. There were a lot of shops were you can buy some interesting things for chrismas. I liked a little Santa clause with a very pretty hat. After that we went to home. There we ate Fondue (a food with bread steak and a cooking pot). It was very nice. Then we had to go to bed.

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Could you please correct this text? Thanks.

Dear diary. Today it was a very nice day. In the math class, we had to answer questions. All the questions were answered by me. After that, we had the history class. We were in the Christmas market too. It was very beautiful, decorated with the candles. There were a lot of shops where you can buy some interesting things for Christmas. I liked a little Santa Claus with a very pretty hat. After that we went to home. There we ate Fondue (a food with bread steak and a cooking pot). It was very nice. Then we had to go to bed.

Could you please correct this text? Thanks

Dear diary. Today it was a very nice day. In maths* we had to answer questions, But and I answered all the questions/[all questions were answered by me]. After that, we had history. We also went to were in the Christmas market too*. It was very beautiful with the candles. There were a lot of shops where you can buy (some) interesting things for Christmas. I liked a little Santa Clause with a very pretty hat. After that we went to home. There We ate fondue (a food with bread steak and a cooking pot [?]) - it was very nice. Then we had to go to bed/Then we went to bed.

* UK : maths ; US and Canada : math

* you would say 'we went to . . . too' if you were telling s.o. about the places you had been or things you had done. However school classes and going somewhere else are different contexts.

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