Could you please review my essay? thank you very much. Hi there, could you please review my essay? Thank you very much. ========================================================= Essay topics: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. ========================================================= Dear Alice, I am writing to you with regard to your recent letter for advice either going to college or getting a job first. Being your friend for years, it is my pleasure to share my experiences with you. Firstly, in a college you will see your classmates are as the similar old as your age, teachers or professors teach you much theory than practical skills and technique, which may not implement in real society. Besides, your peers around you usually do not have much real social experience.