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my first article This is my first article here.I'd like to write something about a video program because i love watching. recentlly,i began to like a video program called Adventure Detective Lei.It is about the experience of a guy named Lei.He go world around by only himself.He goes to the grave,pyramid and some dangerous but mysterious place just by himself.He also goes to the life of the local people.what he bring to us is a really different adventure.I think the program he take is better than the one on TV,because it is so ture.Athrough his english is so poor,he still do a good job.and it is the really amazing place.but i want to improve the international beautiful language so that i can communicate with the lovely guys all over the world.

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My first article.

This is my first article here. I'd like to write something about a video program because I've loved watching it.
Recently, I have begun to like a video program (you could say a 'show') called 'Adventure Detective Lei.' It is about the experience of a guy named Lei. He goes around the world by himself. He goes to a grave, a pyramid, and some other dangerous but mysterious places by himself.He also goes to the life of the local people (I don't quite know what you mean here- do you mean to say he lives the life of the local people?). What he bring to us (the audience) is a really different sort of adventure. I think this program is better than the ones I've seen on TV because it is more true. Athough his English is so poor, he is still able do a good job (communicating?), and he goes to some really amazing places. I want to improve my language skills because I think it is beautiful to be able to communicate with all lovely people from all over the world.


Good job!!!! You are writing really well! :D 

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@abdo:thats nice
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Nice experience ! i hope do it as Egyptian in China ^^

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