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Elaine Cheng
Application Letter Hi Sir, I am glad to see that your company looking for a advisory assistant on website and feel interested in a applying for this position. As i have two year's experience working in CPA firm, as well as i'm interesting in financial field, i have confidence to do occupation well. Attached my CV for reference and give me a opportunity of interview.If i have a choice to work at your department i will do my best. I am looking forward to hearing form you soon. Best, Elaine Cheng

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Application Letter

Hi Dear Sir,

I am glad to see that your company is looking for an advisory assistant. on website and I am feel interested in a applying for this position I would like to apply for the position.

As I have two years' experience working in a CPA firm. as well as I am also interested in the financial field. I have confidence that I can to do this occupation job well.


Attached is my CV for reference. I would appreciate an interview. and give me a opportunity of interview.If I have a choice the opportunity to work at your department I will do my best.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Elaine Cheng

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Application Letter

Hello Sir,

I am glad to see that your company looking for an advisory assistant on a website and I'm interested in applying for this position.

As I have two year's experience working in CPA firm, as well as being interested in the financial field, I have the confidence to do the occupation well.
I have attached my CV for reference and give me a opportunity of interview. If I have the opportunity to work at your department I will do my best.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best,
Elaine Cheng

RED The red sentence should be deleted.

GREEN Should be HELLO because it is formal. HI is an informal word.

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