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about my life Hi, I'ts me again Today I´m going to talk about my life.I really think that I have to search my propuse of life and I have to chance some things about my life such as: 1) My fisical apperence: I admit it I´m a lazy person and i always say "I was going to do exercise but I didn´t have the time".I think that i have to do excercise very often beacause I want to be more healhty 2) My goals: I think that life is very short and i have to be more focus in my goals and what I´m going to do in my future 3) My love situation: I didn´t think about find my soulmate.Now i think that I have to search a person more that a couple.A person who is finding their dreams as me 4) More focus and less lazy: I´m a lazy person and have to change that if I want to be a better person 5) Focus about my carrer: I´m studying internacional advertising and now I´m almost finish my carrer for that reason I decided to be able to change my goals and be more focus.Now I would like to be most able in digital adverising and speaking different languages

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About my life.

Hi, It's me again.
Today I´m going to talk about my life.I really think that I have to search my purpose of life and I have to change some things about my life such as:
1) My physical appearance: I admit that I´m a lazy person and Ii always say: "I am going to exercise but I don't have the time". I think that I have to exercise very often because I want to be more healthy.
2) My goals: I think that life is very short and i have to be more focused in my goals and what I´m going to do in my future.
3) My romantic situation: I never thought about finding my soulmate. Now I think that I have to search for a person more that a couple. A person who is finding her dreams like me. 
4) More focus and less laziness: I´m a lazy person and I have to change that if I want to be a better person.
5) Focus on my career: I´m studying international advertising and now I´ve almost finished my career so that I could be able to change my goals and be more focused. Now I would like to be skilled in digital advertising and speaking different languages.
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about my life

Hi, it's me again
Today I´m going to talk about my life. I really think that I have to find my purpose in life,  search my propuse of life and I have to change some of the things in my life that is bothering me first,  about my life such as those listed below.
1) My physical well-being. I admit I´m a lazy person, and I always like to procrastinate on things that I should do right now, such as doing more exercise. But then, I would tell myself "I was going to do exercise, but I didn´t have the time". I think thatI  I should  have to do exercise more often, because I really want to be more healthy.
2) My goals. I think life is very short, and I have to focus  more on my goals be more focus in my goals and how I am going to achieve them in the future. what I´m going to do in my future
3) My love situation. I did not think much about finding a soulmate before. I didn´t think about find my soulmate. But now I think its time for me to search for one, to search for the someone who has the same dream as me.  i think that I have to search a person more that a couple.A person who is finding their dreams as me
4) Be more focused and be less lazy. I´m a lazy person and have to change that if I want to be a better person.
5) Focus on my career. I´m studying international  advertising, and now I´m almost finish my carrer ?? > You are studying or working ??? > Focus on my career. I´m studying international  advertising, and I am about to finish this course. Then I will focus on having the career that will help me acheive my goals in life, which is a career in digital advertising and to be able to speak different languages.

for that reason I decided to be able to change my goals and be more focus.Now I would like to be most able in digital adverising and speaking different languages

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