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Yesterday, I joined in my friend's birthday party where I saw my handsome friend again. He has a lovely dog which was paid until $100.000. I was shocked about this price. After a half hour, his girl friend arrived who was beautiful with brown wave hair. She came closer to the man. When she just sit down, suddenly his dog told to her "I love you". She was too surprised to hug it immediately. Then she stroked it which can talk nice words. I know the reason why it's worthy. Finally, The party ended with a good news which was an announcement of their wedding on this Noel. We were all invited to their happy party which is being hold on the gorgeous Nha Trang beach with free travelling and free accomodation.
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Yesterday, I joined in my friend's birthday party where I saw my handsome friend again. He had a lovely dog which was paid until costed $100.000. I was shocked at the price. After a half a hour, his girl friend arrived who was beautiful with brown wave hair. She came closer to the man. When she just sat down, suddenly his dog told to her "I love you". She was too surprised so she hugged it immediately. Then she stroked it which could say nice words. I knew the reason why it's worthy. Finally, the party ended with a good news which was an announcement of their wedding on this Noel. We were all invited to their happy party which will be held on the gorgeous Nha Trang beach and offered free travelling opportunity and free accomodation.Such an interesting story Ms. Nga ;)
But remember that you're using the past tense, alright?
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Yesterday, I went to my handsome friend's birthday party. He has a lovely dog that costed $100.000. I was shocked at the price. After a half hour, his girlfriend arrived. She was beautiful, with brown wavy hair. She came closer to him. When she sat down, his dog suddenly told her, "I love you". She was so surprised, she hugged it immediately. Then she stroked it and said nice things to it. Finally, the party ended with good news, an announcement of their wedding, to be held on Christmas. We were all invited to their party, which will be held on gorgeous Nha Trang beach, and offered free transport and accommodation.Want to progress faster?
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