About migration and intolerance
Hi, I'm a Social Comunication and Journalist, actually I have a job like Comunication Manager in a Social Studies Center, the topic central of this Center is the migration. I live in Tijuana and I have relation with U.S.A because The border is front my eyes. I can't believe that human race are separetes for a wall. Constantly I ask to myself what happen with us. Why our divisiones and intolerance... Well, What do you thing?
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About migration and intolerance
Hi, I'm a Social Communicator and Journalist, actually I have a job like Communication Manager in a Social Studies Center, the topic central of this Center is the migration. I live in Tijuana and I have relation with U.S.A because the border is in front of my eyes. I can't believe that human race is separated by a wall. Constantly I ask to myself what happened to us. Why our divisions and intolerance... Well, what do you think?0
Well, you being separated from US is nothing :) UN paied money Turkey to stop immigration from Syria where there is a bloody war and millions of people have to leave their homes and migrate anywhere they can go. The ones that trying to reach Greece and such had to pay big amount of money to human smugglers just to cross over mediterranean sea and most of them drowned, their dead bodies got lost in the sea. UN doesnt want them to come their countries. One of them is only accepted 300 people :) in turkey there are almost 3 million Syrian try to survive and its too much for our economy and well being as a country since we pay them money aid and give them jobs while an important portion of our community is unemployed. They beg everywhere they sleep on streets with lots of children ,most of the women had to get married much older man(like 20 years old to 50-70 years old) than them just to have a home and to be taken cared of with no social security. Some had to sell their bodies. There are very few Syrians that can live happly here and they are the only ones that were rich in Syria and spend that money here. So what happens if you cant enter US (which is going to be harder since Trump is elected) if you have a peace in your home than you should be thankfull for that.. Humanity associated with terms like kindness,caring, full of love etc but none of them true. You can see that on "animal" but not in humans :) ı can say that human race is the worst kind of living on earth we fight we kill we hate we drown in our own jealousies and ı believe we enjoy to being like that or else something would have changed since the beginning of the history.
There are some parts in your post that can be corrected but ı myself am not a native speaker so ı may have mistaken while correcting it, so i am gonna let this someone else :)
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