My diary *_*

My diary *_*

My diary *_*

Today was my last day on vacation. I woke up early, and I went to visit the dentist. The weather was wonderful; the sun and the birds were the first things I saw today. Then, I checked my E-mail and drank coffee with my friend Ali. He is close to me, and I share with him a lot of things; we grew up together. Recently, I was very busy; that's why I haven't met him that often. By the way, I will join him in visiting a skiing station. It's close to my city, about 45 minutes by car. However, we haven't made up our minds yet, so I have to talk to him soon in order to arrange it and buy what we need.Thank you so much for reading.

Nice job, but try to watch out for your capital and small letters. You need to do some research regarding punctuation, especially the usage of commas and semi-colons. Also, make sure you use the correct verb form; it's "grew together", and "drank coffee". Your style is informal which is OK if you're writing only a dairy entry, but if you seek to improve your professional English, try writing about other stuff. Some suggested topics can be: gender equality, Egypt current affair, work environment, types of personalities and how deal with each, talk about your major, your dreams etc.. Thanks for reading my review. :) 

My diary *_*