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Dependent on the mobile phone As is shown above,some young men play their mobile phone when they meeting friends.Today many solks neglect social intercourse in real life but pour more attention in virtual friendship,such as WeChat,QQ and facebook.This is no flash in the pan;over the past couples of years,people spend more and more time on their smartphone every day. The picture tell us that our life has been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances,and integral part to every aspect of modern life.As a popular saying goes;every coin has two sides.On the one hand,the progress can enhance people's understanding on a subject,improve people's learning capacity and skills,smooth the communication between others.But on the other hand,while mobile network,as have been mentioned above,make our far away from real friendship,love and kinship,let alone the negative effect triggered by pron movies,violent video and their like. The link between smartphone and peoples shows up only those who capture the moment and real.If you want to be the master of your own life,youmust first change the relationship between virtual world and person who you are facing.

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Dependent on the mobile phone

As is shown above, some young men play their mobile phone when they are meeting friends. Today many folks neglect social intercourse in real life but pour their attention into virtual friendships,such as on WeChat, QQ and Facebook. This is no flash in the pan; over the past couples of years, people spend more and more time on their smartphone every day.
The picture tells us that our lives have been greatly influenced and changed by scientific and technological advances, and are an integral part of every aspect of modern life. As a popular saying goes: every coin has two sides. On the one hand, the progress can enhance people's understanding of a subject, improve people's learning capacity and skills, and smooth communication between others. On the other hand, while mobile networks, as have been mentioned above, move us far away from real friendship, love and kinship,let alone the negative effect triggered by porn movies, violent videos, and their like.
The link between smartphones and people shows us those who capture the moment and real*. If you want to be the master of your own life,you must first change the relationship between the virtual world and the person who you are facing.


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