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The disadvantages of techonoly However, disadvantages and advantages are coexisting. On the one hand, technological products has replaced a large number of human labor, accordingly they lay off the rising of unemployment rate and lead to social unset. On the other hand, massive traditional air crafts which were popular in the past will vanish and a part of culture will be gone with them too. In addition, with the development of industry the environment is also facing great challenges, such as serious pollution and consumption of limited natural resources, etc. As a saying goes, every coins has two sides.

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The disadvantages of techonoly technology

However, disadvantages and advantages are coexisting coexist. On the one hand, technological products has have replaced a large number amount of human labor, accordingly they lay off the rising of unemployment rate [I don't know what this means] and lead to social unset. On the other hand, massive amounts of traditional air arts and crafts which were popular in the past will vanish and a part of culture will be gone with them too. In addition, with the development of industry the environment is also facing great challenges, such as serious pollution and consumption of limited natural resources, etc. As a the saying goes, every coins coin has two sides.


Great job! Only a few mistakes.  I understood the point of every sentence, except for the part highlighted in blue.

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awesome
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The disadvantages of technology

However, disadvantages and advantages are coexisting. On the one hand, technological products has have replaced a large number amount of human labor, accordingly they lay off cause (?) the rising of unemployment rate and lead to social unset. On the other hand, massive traditional air crafts which were popular in the past will vanish and a part of culture will be gone with them too. In addition, with the development of industry the environment is also facing great challenges, such as serious pollution and consumption of limited natural resources, etc. As a saying goes, every coins has two sides.
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There are no disadvantages of technology. Technological advancement is inevitable!
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The disadvantages of technology

Disadvantages and advantages are coexisting. On the one hand, technological products have replaced a large number of human labor, accordingly they lay off the rising of unemployment rate and lead to social unrest. On the other hand, massive traditional air crafts, which were popular in the past, will vanish and a part of culture and will be gone with them too. In addition, the development of industry the environment is also facing great challenges, such as serious pollution and consumption of limited natural resources, etc. As a saying goes, every coins has two sides.


this is very well written! 

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