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An essay based on the picture below As is graphically described in the cartoon, Children's grownth is dominated by their parents. The girl in the picture is holding her admission notice, telling her mom:"Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice." Another woman, her mom, is sitting in the sofa with a satisfied smile. According to the picture, we can draw a conclution that parents play a very important role in their children's growth, which even makes children lost themselves. As far as I'm concerned, parents are supposed to be good guides in children's life within limits. The first reason is that children are too young to make correct decisions. They can't distinguish right from wrong. Second, education is the duty of parents to their Children. Finally, although they are young, every child is an independent individual with unique ideas about everything. Therefore, their lives should only be arranged by themselves. In a word, children should have the right to decide how their lives are like. In summary, parents should be guides but not managers in children's growth.

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An essay based on the picture below

As is graphically described in the cartoon, Children's growth is dominated by their parents. The girl in the picture is holding her admission notice, telling her mom:"Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice." A 1* woman, her mom, is sitting in the sofa with a satisfied smile. According to the picture, we can draw the 2* conclusion that parents play a very important role in their children's growth. This can make children lose* themselves.

As far as I'm concerned, parents are supposed to be good guides in their children's lives, within limits. The first reason is that children are too young to make correct decisions. They can't distinguish right from wrong. Secondly, education is the duty of parents to their children. Finally, although they are young, every child is an independent individual with unique ideas about everything. Therefore, their lives should only be arranged by themselves. In conclusion 3*, children should have the right to decide how their lives should be like.
To reiterate 4*, parents should be guides but not managers in children's growth.

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