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Begging Yesterday, I was at bus and a little boy with dirty face and clothes stood near me. He seemed 4 or 5 years old. He was tired and hungry. He was a child beggar. I felt sad for him but not for his appearance because of his evil parent who misused their kid. I could help him but I didn’t. I never help beggars. I have some reasons. I watched some report on the news about milliner beggars!!! Some people aren’t poor they are tricky and lazy. They use some weird ways to deceive people. For example they hurt their kids and their body or tell some terrible stories or some threatening writing. I believe beggars make society unpleasant and unsafe. Police should arrested them and clear the society. I just help poor students at schools hidden. I want they feel they receive a gift and they don’t lose their confidence. Another reason is, when we help them obviously, it is a good motivation and encouragement for them to develop their ways to deceive people more and more and beside the others would tend to be new beggars but when we don’t help them they leave their business! What is your idea about beggars? Do you help them? Do you think beggars are real poor people? I don’t think. They are lazy people. What strange stories you heard about beggars? Share it with us. Please leave your comments and correct my text. Thank you.

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Begging

Yesterday, I was at the bus stop and a little boy with a dirty face and clothes stood near me. He seemed to be about four or five years old. He was tired and hungry. He was a child beggar. I felt sad for him, not because of his appearance, but because of his evil parent who misused their child. I could have helped him, but I didn’t. I never help beggars. I have some reasons. I watched some reports on the news about millionaire beggars!!! Some people aren’t poor, they are tricky and lazy. They use some weird ways to deceive people. For example, they hurt their kids and their body, or tell some terrible stories or show some threatening writing. I believe beggars make society unpleasant and unsafe. Police should arrested them and clear the society. I just help poor students at schools anonymously. I want them to feel they receive a gift so they don’t lose their confidence.
Another reason not to give to beggars is that when we help them obviously, it is a good motivation and encouragement for them to develop their tactics to deceive people more and more. Also, others would tend to become beggars themselves, but if we don’t help them they leave their business!
What is your opinion about beggars?
Do you help them?
Do you think beggars are really poor people? I don’t think. They are lazy people.
What strange stories have you heard about beggars? Share it with us.
Please leave your comments and correct my text.
Thank you.
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Begging

Yesterday, I was at the bus and a little boy with a dirty face and clothes stood near me. He seemed 4 or 5 years old. He was weary tired and hungry. He was a child beggar. I felt sad for him but not for his appearance because of his evil parent who misused their kid. I could help him but I didn’t. I never help beggars. I have some reasons. I watched some report on the news about milliner beggars!!! Some people aren’t poor they are tricky and lazy. They use some weird ways to deceive people. For example they hurt their kids and their body or tell some terrible stories or some threatening writing. I believe beggars make society unpleasant and unsafe. Police should arrested them and clear the society. I just help poor students at schools incognito hidden. I want they feel they receive a gift and they don’t lose their confidence.
Another reason is, when we help them obviously, it is a good motivation and encouragement for them to develop their ways to deceive people more and more and beside the others would tend to be new beggars but when we don’t help them they leave their business!
What is all your idea about beggars?
Do you help them?
Do you think beggars are really poor people? I don’t think. They are lazy people.
What strange stories you heard about beggars? Share it with us.
Please leave Let go of your comments and correct my text.
Thank you.

Great! Incognito help is the most effective way. 

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I dont know if they are really poor but your implication is a little harsh and cold and lack of empathy. Put yourself in their shoes. You grew up with parents who teach you there is only one way to earn money and its by begging for it. Or you are still a kid who is forced to beg for money.. Yes maybe some people can break the cycle and find themselves decent jobs and build an honest life but remember the things you learn in childhood is like cement used in a building they are hard to change after a while. Also, now we have refugees who ı see everywhere begging for money..They really have no money they do not have a home they left all their belongings back in Syria. People here rent them literally shacks more expensive because they had to live anywhere and some of them dont even bother to rent them just because they are refugees. In america when the mortgage crisis hit, lots of people lost their houses and had to live in streets and probably beg for money even though they were normal decent american citizens.. Still,I never give beggers money instead if ı have something to eat ı ask them if they want it and give that or ıf ı see one all the time at the same spot( such as refugees who beg) ı give them my old clothes cardigans etc. You would ve lost nothing if you had treated that kid a meal. I know your argument will be that, parents should have work instead of beg.I agree %100. But my point is that there may be some other things in life that put you in conditions you have never thought of. İnstead of "cleaning society" governments need to have some centers for giving these people job and help them to build their life. Also, ı have never heard a begger attack on someone or rape someone dont act like they all are filthy criminals. My suggestion to you is that stop being so judgemental and get out of your secured bubble and see the people in need,see what they have been through in life. There are always grey areas in life along with black and white.

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