refuelling for car
I refuel my car every week. I refuel my car ninety second gasoline. I usually ride to the gas station at the night. I don't like the long turn by the gas station. I have fueled my car today for thirty liters. Refueling consist from several action: first of all you must to find the closest gas station, the second you must to stop your car in front of gasoline gun in this gas station, the third you should unscrew the fuel cap and insert the gasoline gun into the gasoline tank. After that you should go to the cashier and pay him money for gasoline for your car.
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refuelling for car
I refuel my car every week. I refuel my car with ninety second gasoline. I usually ride to the gas station at the night. I don't like the long turn by the gas station. I have fueled my car today for thirty liters. Refueling consists of from several actions: first of all you must to find the closest gas station, the second you must to stop your car in front of gasoline gun in this gas station, the third you should unscrew the fuel cap and insert the gasoline gun into the gasoline tank. After that you should go to the cashier and pay him money for the gasoline for your car.The action you are doing is refueling. To say what you are refueling your car with you have to use "with." "92" or "ninety second" is the grade. I think you would be understood better if you were to use that word. For example, "I like to drink under fifteen alcohol." Maybe you know that is "fifteen percent" or "15 %," but maybe some people won't so it is best to be clear.
"Consists + of" is the typical way to write this.
"Several" is plural (more than one) so "action" has to agree and be plural as well -> "actions".
"First of all you..." is okay, but then you should use "Second," or "secondly." OR you could use "The first step is that..." and then "the second is that..."
"You must...to" We don't use "must + to" we use "must" alone. ex. "You must eat your dinner!"
"the gasoline" here we use "the" to make the gasoline specific. What gasoline are you paying him for? The gasoline that is in your car.
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Great paragraph! You did well with explaining the order and using transition words like, "first of all," and "after!" :)
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