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My résumé Hi everyone, Today I post my résumé. I'm currently looking for a job in Ireland. I need some help to correct it, Could you help me please ? I can help you in return :) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE Immo Conseils May 2015 – Sept 2016 Real estate agent (1 year and 5 months)  Market research, door-to-door sales, property management, rent of properties  Incoming/Outgoing inventory  Coordination and planning of Viewings  Advices for landlord (Taxation, Real Estate, Legal…) Train de la rhune June – Sept 2014 Sales assistant (3 Months)  To welcome, counsel, inform and sell products to the customers  To fill the shelfs and stock management Signature Traffic Systems June-July 2013 / Dec 2013 – Jan 2014 Immo Conseils Dec 2014 – Jan 2015 Management assistant (6 Months)  To welcome, counseil, inform the customers  Creation of various internal documents for the firm  Ordering and ranking of internal documents CERTIFICATE • EPSECO BAYONNE 2015-2016 Bachelor’s degree in real estate • EPSECO BAYONNE 2012-2015 HND Certificate in management assistant (baccalaureat more 2 years) • Lycée St Joseph Hasparren 2009-2012 Baccalaureat (high school diploma) in industrial design SKILLS o I have a good level in : Microsoft Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Publisher o Language skills : French (Mother tongue) ; Spanish (Level B2) o Others software skills : Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Lightroom o Personal skills : resistance to stress, capacity of listening and questioning, adaptation INTERESTS & OTHER • Photography, photography editing, jogging, boxe, Reading, blogging • Driver licence : B – B1 – AM (Car and scooter)

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My résumé

Hi everyone,

Today I post my résumé. I'm currently looking for a job in Ireland. I need some help to correct it, Could you help me please ? I can help you in return :)
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PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Immo Conseils May 2015 – Sept 2016
Real Estate Agent (1 year and 5 months)

 Market research, door-to-door sales, property management, rent of properties
 Incoming/Outgoing inventory
 Coordination and planning of Viewings
 Advice for landlord (Taxation, Real Estate, Legal…)

Train de la rhune June – Sept 2014
Sales assistant (3 Months)

 To welcome, counsel, inform and sell products to customers
 To fill the shelves and manage the stock

Signature Traffic Systems June-July 2013 / Dec 2013 – Jan 2014
Immo Conseils Dec 2014 – Jan 2015
Management assistant (6 Months)

 To welcome, advise and inform customers
 Creation of various internal documents for the firm
 Ordering and prioritizing internal documents

CERTIFICATE

• EPSECO BAYONNE 2015-2016
Bachelor’s degree in real estate

• EPSECO BAYONNE 2012-2015
HND Certificate in management assistant (baccalaureat plus 2 years)

• Lycée St Joseph Hasparren 2009-2012
Baccalaureat (high school diploma) in industrial design

SKILLS

o Good level in : Microsoft Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Publisher
o Language skills : French (Mother tongue) ; Spanish (Level B2)
o Others software skills : Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Lightroom
o Personal skills : stress resistant, able to listen, question and adapt

INTERESTS & OTHER

• Photography, photographic editing, jogging, boxing, reading, blogging
• Driver licence : B – B1 – AM (Car and scooter)

Very well written! You're hired (not fired)!

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My résumé

Hi everyone,

Today I post my résumé. I'm currently looking for a job in Ireland. I need some help to correct it, Could you help me please ? I can help you in return :)
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Immo Conseils May 2015 – Sept 2016
Real estate agent (1 year and 5 months)

 Market research, door-to-door sales, property management, rental of properties
 Incoming/Outgoing inventory
 Coordination and planning of Viewings
Advices for landlord (Taxation, Real Estate, Legal…)

Train de la rhune June – Sept 2014
Sales assistant (3 Months)

 To welcome, counsel, inform and sell products to the customers
 To fill the shelfs shelves and stock management   manage internal stock inventory

Signature Traffic Systems June-July 2013 / Dec 2013 – Jan 2014
Immo Conseils Dec 2014 – Jan 2015
Management assistant (6 Months)

 To welcome, counseil, inform the customers
 Creation of various internal documents for the firm
 Ordering and ranking of internal documents

CERTIFICATE

• EPSECO BAYONNE 2015-2016
Bachelor’s degree in real estate

• EPSECO BAYONNE 2012-2015
HND Certificate in management assistant (baccalaureat more 2 years)

• Lycée St Joseph Hasparren 2009-2012
Baccalaureat (high school diploma) in industrial design

SKILLS

o I have a good level in : Microsoft Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Publisher
o Language skills : French (Mother tongue) ; Spanish (Level B2)
o Others software skills : Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Lightroom
o Personal skills : resistance to stress, capacity of listening and questioning, adaptation

*Just a suggestion, but I found it is often nice to write a small paragraph about yourself and your personal skills rather than listing them*


INTERESTS & OTHER

• Photography, photography editing, jogging, boxe, boxing, Reading, blogging
• Driver licence : B – B1 – AM (Car and scooter)

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