An exciting experience
A few years ago, my friends and I went to a mountain who is near my village. We hadn't been there since we were child and we wanted to go back, but this time we didn't follow the marks and we got lost. My friend Esther and me came back to find a correct way but other firiend decided to continue. One hour later we could see him on the top of a small mountain and he didn't know get out of there. He took another hour to find a way. At the end, people who were near there helped him down.
It wasn't a positive experience. I´ll never go with this friend to the mountain. I felt scared and I didn´t know what to do .
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An exciting experience
A few years ago, my friends and I went to a mountain who that is near my village.who - про одушевлённые объекты, людей, но не неодушевлённые (как гора).
We hadn't been there since we were child children and we wanted to go back, but this time we didn't follow the marks and we got lost. My friend Esther and me came back to find a the correct way but other firiend the other friend decided to continue.
Человек, который продолжил идти первой дорогой, был один - поэтому понятно, о ком речь, поэтому the.
One hour later we could see him on the top of a small mountain and he didn't know get out of there. He It took him another hour to find a way. At In the end, people who were near there helped him down.
It wasn't a positive experience. I´ll never go with this friend to the mountain again. I felt scared and I didn´t know what to do.
Всё отлично, только exciting (в названии) предполагает, что поход вам всё-таки понравился, если бы только не использовали exciting саркастически. Если вы имеете в виду, что волновались в плохом смысле, вместо exciting лучше подойдёт uneasy, worrisome.
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An exciting experience.
A few years ago, my friends and I went to a mountain that is near to my village. We hadn't been there since we were children and we wanted to go back, but this time we didn't follow the signs and we got lost. My friend Esther and I came back to find the correct way but our other friend decided to continue. One hour later we could see him on the top of a small mountain and he didn't know get out of there. He took another hour to find a way. In the end, people who were near there helped him down.It wasn't a positive experience. I´ll never go with this friend to the mountain again. I felt scared and I didn't know what to do .
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