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Essay practise for CAE exam "Technological progress makes us live faster, but it also means we have less time for the important things in life such as relationships." Some people may say that technological advantages have changed our lifes to a more frenetic state where the important things such as social interaction have no place in. Although this assertion may b true to some extent, there are arguments against them worth to present. In contrast to our ancestors, we are able to save time that , otherwise, would be spent on household tasks, travelling to work or in the exhausting jobs themselves. Thanks to technological progress, our working lifes have been improved by modern devices, our transports are faster and more effective and even chores are lighter to do than they used to. On the other hand, it is true that we have far more amussements than before, for example the Internet or the TV, which can separe us from others. But it is also undeniable thay today's comunication arrives further than it used to and that allows us to take contact with people we could not 50 years ago. This difference should not be considered an stepback in our relationships. To sum up, I agree that how we see life has changed and speeded up, however this does not mean that we have less time to invest in things of great importance. On the contrary, we are now in better conditions to enjoy everything the world has to offer once that past barriers have been overcome.

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Essay practise for CAE exam

"Technological progress makes us live faster, but it also means we have less time for the important things in life such as relationships."

Some people may say that technological advantages have changed our lives into a more frenetic state where the important things such as social interaction have no place. Although this assertion may be true to some extent, there are arguments against them worth presenting.

In contrast to our ancestors, we are able to save time that , otherwise, would be spent on household tasks, travelling to work or in the exhausting jobs themselves. Thanks to technological progress, our working lives have been improved by modern devices, our transport  is faster and more effective and even chores are lighter to do than they used to.

On the other hand, it is true that we have far more amusements than before, for example the Internet or the TV, which can separate us from others. But it is also undeniable that today's communication arrives quicker than it used to and that allows us to take contact with people we could not 50 years ago. This difference should not be considered an step backwards in our relationships.

To sum up, I agree that how we see life has changed and speeded up, however this does not mean that we have less time to invest in things of great importance. On the contrary, we are now in a better condition to enjoy everything the world has to offer once that past barriers have been overcome.

Hello Paula,

Nice essay well laid out and good arguments. Several of the corrections were for spelling mistakes rather than anything else!

Hope this helps


Bob

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Essay practise for CAE exam

"Technological progress makes us live faster, but it also means we have less time for the important things in life such as relationships."

Some people may say that technological advantages have changed our lifes to a more frenetic state where the important things such as social interaction have no place in. Although this assertion maybe true to some extent, there are arguments against it worth noting.

In contrast to our ancestors, we are able to save time that , otherwise, would be spent on household tasks, travelling to work or in our exhausting jobs themselves. Thanks to technological progress, our working lifes have been improved by modern devices, our transport system is faster and more effective and even chores are lighter/easier to do than what they used to be.

On the other hand, it is true that we have far more amusements than before, for example the Internet or the TV, which can separate us from others. But it is also undeniable that today's communication arrives faster than it used to and it allows us to be in contact with people who live far away, something that we could not have done 50 years ago. This difference should not be considered an step Delete repeated word in our relationships.

To sum up, I agree that how we see life has changed and speeded up, however this does not mean that we have less time to invest in things of great importance. On the contrary, we are now have better living conditions to enjoy everything the world has to offer once that past barriers have been overcome.

Excellent, well done.

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