Diary Entry for December 7th
I feel upset and sad today. Be a graduate，a important assignment is to write graduate thesis. Before writing it formally，we are asked to submit a general outline to our instructor. Then the instructor will evaluate the theme and decide if it worth being researching.
I submitted my outline last week，and my instructor send me the feedback today. He told me the theme is contradictory to our current policy. So I have to choose another one. I am so depressed！I have to continue looking up data and put up with another theme. Furthermore，the deadline is this sunday. My god！
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Diary Entry for December 7th
I feel upset and sad today. As a graduate student, Be a graduate，an important assignment is to write graduate thesis. Before writing it formally，we are asked to submit a general outline to our instructor. Then the instructor will evaluate the theme and decide if it is worth researching being researching.I submitted my outline last week，and my instructor sent send me the feedback today. He told me the theme is contradictory to our current policy. So I have to choose another one. I am so depressed！I have to continue looking up data and put up with another theme. (**?) Furthermore，the deadline is this sunday. My god！
Dahlia -- great work! Nice structure and your grammar is generally good. I wish my Chinese was as good as your English! Just a couple comments to help your progress:
- A graduate is someone who has already finished, or graduated.
- "Topic" or "subject" may be more appropriate than "theme," in this case.
- When you say "put up with another theme," do you mean you have to use another theme that someone else gave you, even though you don't want to? "Put up with" means to tolerate something. Or maybe you mean you need to find a new theme? Then you can just say "find a new theme."
I hope this is helpful. Good luck finding a new topic for your thesis!
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