Mere bare mein
Mera nam Brodie hain aur mein Canadian hoon. Mera bachpaan Ottawa mein ta, lekin main ab Toronto mein rah raha hoon. Main 2012 ke baad se Toronto mein raha. Main hotel mein kam karta hoon kyonki mujhe paisa chahiye, lekin main professional photographer hona chahta hoon.
Main Hindi seekh raha hoon kyonki main Bharat se January mein jaoonga. Main Bharat mein se pehle ta, lekin main ab photo project kar raha hoon. Main Bharat mein chaar maheene hounga.
Mere sahayta karo, please!
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Mere bare mein
Mera nam Brodie hain aur mein Canadian hoon. Mera bachpaan Ottawa mein ta tha, lekin main ab Toronto mein rah raha hoon. Main 2012 ke baad se Toronto mein raha rahataa hu. Main hotel mein kam karta hoon kyonki mujhe paisa paise (paise is plural of paisa) chahiye, lekin main professional photographer hona bananaa chahta hoon.Main Hindi seekh raha hoon kyonki main Bharat se January mein Bharat jaoonga. Main Bharat mein se pehle ta pehale jaa chuka hu (I have been to India before), lekin main ab photo project kar raha hoon. Main Bharat mein chaar maheene hounga rahunga.
Mere Meri sahayta sahaayato karo , please! (kijiye would be a more polite alternative to karo since you are requesting. Karo is used when you want someone to do something)
Looking for someone to correct my Hindi mistakes, and I can correct your mistakes in English!
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Guarav and Kamil,
Thanks for the support! I've been learning for a few months, and did learn the entire Devanagari but recently stopped using it because I only have a month until I go and it was slowing my learning down. (Although it has arguably taken it's toll on my pronunciation.)
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Brodie, that's really a portion of good hindi. I studied indology with hindi path at the University of Warsaw, Poland. The only thing I can recommend for a foreigner (as myself) is to learn and try to write (type) in devanagari. It's much easier to remember orthography.
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Your hindi is great! And Prasad's corrections below are also on point. :)
Have you begun learning Devanagari, Brodie? Latin script isn't very good for remembering how words sound in Hindi, but in Devanagari you always have to remember the difference between short vowels and long vowels, and between त and ट for example so it's also good for receiving more precise corrections that can reflect more accurate pronunciation.
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