Is there any mistake in this prhase? You'll always be my broken dream, and that's enough for me, I will never try again. You're free.

Eddie

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Is there any mistake in this phrase?

You'll always be my broken dream, and that's enough for me, I will never try again. You're free.

A lot of the English language is contextual and based on the situation. Grammatically, this seems fine.

Also, very sad.

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