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First notebook entry: Introducing myself my name is Pan lu ,it's very happy to be there.And i want to impove my english form friends.could you want be my friends?

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Happy to be here also, and thank you for correcting my entries! I appreciate it!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Pan lu ,it's very happy to be there.And i want to impove my english form friends.could you want be my friends

My name is Pan Lu. I am very happy to be here. And I want to improve my  English  by making friends. Would you like to be my friend.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Pan lu ,it's very happy to be there.And i want to impove my english form friends.could you want be my friends?

my name is Pan lu, I'm very happy to be here. And I want to improve my english by making friends . would you like to be my friend ?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

my name is Pan lu ,it's very happy to be there.( I'm very happy to be  here ) .And i want to impove(improve) my english form friends.( by making friends ) .could you want be my friends?( will you be my friend ? )
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hi my name is harry

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