Plesse correct my essay! Do Not Give Money to Poor People It is said the gap between rich and poor is increasing. So even though poor country’s people try hard to earn money, they aren’t always able to get enough money. Moreover, poor people who don’t have opportunities to go to school can’t get a job. Even so, I firmly believe you shouldn’t money to poor people who beg me for money. Therefore, I’ll describe why you shouldn’t give money and what to do when you want to support poor people. First reason is that dishonest adults exploit children as a good resource of funds. When you go to developing country, lots of children ask us for giving money. Then, we shouldn’t give any money because after giving money, most of children have to present the money to adults. Moreover, because children beg money to tourists, they can’t go to school. Because they can’t go to school, they remain poor and the country remain poor too. It is negative chain. So, in order to save poor people, we shouldn’t give money to them. Once we give money to poor people, they too much depend on us. They do not always have a chance to be supported by someone, so it’s imperative to have a passion to get over a difficulty. If developed countries always support them, they might cease trying to get a job or solve problems on their own. In addition, when someone or some countries can support them, it’s not thorough solution but temporary solution. The reason is that they only get money and they don’t make money. That mean if they need money again, they have no choice to depend other country. That’s why, we shouldn’t give money to support developing country’s development. Finally, if you want to developing country’s people, you should give money to UNICEF or such institution. It’s difficult for most people to donate large amount of money, but it’s easy to do 1 dollar. Of course, 1 dollar is not much enough to build a school or help many people. However, when a lot of people give 1 dollar, many people would be able to survive. Not only that, when we give money to an institution, it’s unlikely that adults exploit money from children. It means children have a chance to go to school and they can study a lot. When a lot of people in developing countries have a plenty of education opportunities and can get a good job, they can make a lot of money and they don’t have to developing countries any more.