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All these factors generate consequences, and they are all chained together. Nitrate concentration and eutrophication provoke algae proliferation. This accumulation of algae makes green water and mud soil. Because there is more algae, there is more food for the fish, so now there is a gilt-head bream overproduction. Finally, this is an ecological imbalance that destroys the autochthonous biodiversity. Mainly the state of the water for the bathroom is what has caused the decline of tourism and the concern of governments.
To end, the most important solution is the zero spill, that is the sealing of the brine discharge pipes, drive the drainage waters of the Rambla del Albujón to the Desalination plant located in Cabo de Palos, the Development of green filters to allow the creation of an artificial wetland and the Construction of storm tanks for the disposal of urban runoff discharges. And out of the zero spill, there are many boats so should be limited the mooring points and motor boat access.
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Script? of my speech (3)
All these factors generate have consequences and they are all chained linked together. Nitrate concentration and eutrophication provoke algae proliferation. This accumulation of algae makes green water the water green and mud the soil muddy. Because there is More algae means there is more food for the fish, so now there is and this has led to an overproduction of gilt-head bream . Finally, Consequently, there is an an ecological imbalance that destroys is destroying the autochthonous biodiversity. Mainly In addition, the state of the water for in the bathroom is what has caused causing a the decline in tourism and this is the a major concern of governments.To end conclude, the most important solution is the 'zero spill', that is the sealing of the brine discharge pipes, the drive driving of the drainage waters of the Rambla del Albujón to the Ddesalination plant located in Cabo de Palos, the Ddevelopment of green filters to allow the creation of an artificial wetland and the Cconstruction of storm tanks for the disposal of urban run-off discharges. And out of the zero spill, there are many There are too many boat so boats so should they must be limited to the mooring points and motorboat access.
Paragraph 1 - Do you mean "promote" rather than "provoke"? I would use "promote" as "provoke" is normally used for living things e.g. humans and animals.
Paragraph 2 - I couldn't understand the last sentence, also seemed somewhat incomplete, like it needs a word after "access" such as waterways or points?.
Also watch out for tenses as they must be consistent in a sentence!
In any case well done as it is very difficult to write professionally in a foreign language!
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Script? of my speech (3)
All these factors generate consequences, and they are all chained together. Nitrate concentration and eutrophication provoke algae proliferation. This accumulation of algae makes green water and mud soil. Because there is more algae, there is more food for the fish, so now there is a gilt-head bream overproduction. Finally, this is an ecological imbalance that destroys the autochthonous biodiversity. Mainly the state of the water for the bathroom is what has caused the decline of tourism and the concern of governments.To end, the most important solution is the zero spill, that is the sealing of the brine discharge pipes, driving the drainage waters of the Rambla del Albujón to the Desalination plant located in Cabo de Palos, the Development of green filters to allow the creation of an artificial wetland and the Construction of storm tanks for the disposal of urban runoff discharges. Finally, other than the zero spill, mooring points and motor boat access should also be limited due to the large number of boats.
WELL DONE. Nicely written and hardly any major errors.
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