The Stranger. Part 3. Please, correct my mistakes.
"Look, we have to get away as soon as possible. I've been exploring the districts of the city, I talked to people. You know, they f...ing wasted everything except of matter..."
"Calm down, Damien. I know what you're feeling, just take it easy." Lisa said quietly
"Have you found the way?"
"I'm not sure. We should try some methods..."
"But I'm sure. We'll go there whereevere that place is and we'll try to do everything we can till we reach our destination. If you opine we were heading upon the wrong way by random you understand badly what's going on."
"I know about... " Lisa said.
"Listen to me. If you have some ideas, we'll use it tomorrow in the morning after we get the decent rest. Otherwise we'll be wandering for a long time"
"Well... We'll try. Yesterday I called Druids... They know what happened. I hope they can help us"
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The Stranger. Part 3. Please, correct my mistakes.
"Look, we have to get away as soon as possible. I've been exploring the districts of the city, I talked to people. You know, they f...ing wasted everything except of matter-?...""Calm down, Damien. I know what you're feeling, just take it easy," Lisa said quietly.
"Have you found the way?"
"I'm not sure. We should try some different ways..."
"But I'm sure. We'll go there, wherever that place is, and we'll try to do everything we can till we reach our destination. If you think we were(?) heading the wrong way by accident, you don't really understand what's going on."
"I know... " Lisa said.
"Listen to me. If you have some ideas, we'll use them tomorrow in the morning after we get some decent rest. Otherwise we'll be wandering for a long time."
"Well... we'll try. Yesterday I called the Druids... they know what happened. I hope they can help us."
Hi, just fixed up some words so that the story makes a little more sense :)
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...except of matter..." < this part i couldn't understand.
...We'll go there WHEREVER that place is. .... If your OPINION... < just some minor spelling errors
... after we get A decent rest.
...otherwise we'll be wandering around for a long time? < possible fix.
Just rolls smoother off the tongue when reading out loud.
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