beautiful mind ...please check my text,thanks all
in the world, there is a lot of ban front of successful person who want to have all of things but there is difference slender, they know exactly what they want.
I think that the most important point in here is structures mind because the mind can be tools for achieve to goals. If someone don't have idea for future or there is no program front of himself, after a while he/she will can't change his/her life.
life is very short.
you don't have time enough and you have the best guider in your life, it's experience others , you can use it and improvement in your life no worry.
There is a lot of reference about experience such as great man story books and internet and close friends and etc.
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beautiful mind ...please check my text,thanks all
In this world, there are a lot of successful people who want to have all things. But there is a small difference - they know exactly what they want.I think that the most important point here is the structure of the mind because the mind can be the tool for achieving goals. If someone doesn't have any ideas for future, or there is no program for themselves, after a while they won't be able to change their life.
Life is very short.
You don't have enough time, but you do have the best guider in your life - it's the experience of others. You can use it to improve in your life, no worries.
There are a lot of references about experience, such as stories of great men, the internet and close friends etc.
Hi, I've just rewritten this so it makes a little more sense. Good job though :)
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Beautiful mind
In the world, there are a lot of ban front of successful person who want to have all of things but there is difference slender, they know exactly what they want. (This sentence doesn't make sense, they're successful people who have all things yet know exactly what they want?)Please rephrase this sentence so that I can proceed xx It sounds like an interesting article!
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