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The first note.
Hi! Now I am wtitting my first note. I remember that some time ago I tried to learn this way but I gave up. Now I will do that more responcibly. I am from small town from Russia (next to Kazan if you know). I'm only 15 y.o. I live here for a half of year or maybe 9 month. Earlier I lived in North part of Russia (it's near from Murmansk). I'm gonna pass English exams it the end of year and now I have to prepare. I'm sure that it will help me. Moreover I'ld like to help smbd in studing my mother language. It will be better if you know English and you will help me.Ohh, I wrote too much. I'm tired. Please comment about my mistakes)
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The First Note ...
Hello, I am writing my first note. I remember that some time ago I tried to learn this way but I gave up and now I will try more responsibly. I am from a small town in Russia, next to Kazan if you know the area. I'm only 15 years old. I have lived here somewhere between 6 to 9 month. Earlier, I lived in the northern part of Russia near Murmansk. I'm gonna pass some English exams at the end of this year and now I have to prepare. I'm sure that it will help me. Moreover, I'd like to help somebody who wants to study my mother language. It would be better if they know English and then they can help me too.
Ohh, I wrote too much. I'm tired. Please comment about my mistakes.
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Wow ..for 15 years of age are you ever a good English writer ... very person to person and natural ...very good Alexey! Keep up the great work!
Robin
The My first note:
Hi! Now I am wtitting writing my first note. I remember that some time ago I tried to learn this way but I gave up. Now I will do that it more responcibly responsibly. I am from a small town from in Russia (next to Kazan if you know). I'm only 15 y.o. and I have lived here for a half of a year or maybe 9 months. Earlier I lived in the Northern part of Russia (it's near from Murmansk). I'm gonna going to pass my English exams it at the end of the year and now I have to prepare. I'm sure that it this will help me. Moreover I'd like to help smbd somebody in with studying my mother language. It will be better if you know English and you will help me (It would be better if you knew English so that you could help me).Ohh, I wrote too much. I'm tired. Please comment about my mistakes.
Nice job! Very easy to understand for an English speaker.
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