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Introduce myself My name is Long. I'm eighteen years old. I come from HN. Currently, I am a student at FPT University. I have many interests including watching TV, playing basketball, hanging out with my friends. But I love listening to music the most. My hobby started when I was a child. I like dancing to the melodies, it is amazing and comfortable. I spend much time on it. I always listening to music while doing exercise, doing my housework such as clean the floor, clean the windows or when I sleeping. I am crazy about EDM and pop music. I love ST, Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber … they are all great singer. I can learn English through US and UK songs and it also makes me feel relaxed. I love it and I will never stop it. I really want to improving my English. I hope eveyone will help me. Thank! I really appreciate it

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. I always listening to music while doing exercise, doing my housework such as clean the floor, clean the windows or when I sleeping.

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Introduce myself

... I love it and I will never stop loving it. I really want to improveing my English...


Other mistakes were corrected  by Yo. Therefore, I didn't write out again. 

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Introduce myself

My name is Long. I'm eighteen years old. I come from HN. Currently, I am a student at FPT University. I have many interests including watching TV, playing basketball, hanging out with my friends. But I love listening to music the most. My hobby started when I was a child. I like dancing to the melodies, it is amazing and comfortable. I spend much time on it. I always listening to music while doing exercise, doing my housework such as cleaning the floor, cleaning the windows or when I sleeping. I am crazy about EDM and pop music. I love ST, Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber … they are all great singers. I can learn English through US and UK songs and it also makes me feel relaxed. I love it and I will never stop it. I really want to improving my English. I hope everyone will help me. Thanks! I really appreciate it.

Good writing Long! 

And you used a lot of nice structures. I appreciate that <3 

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