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A little trick My hairs is too long nearly reach my waist. I have wore it many years. A week ago, I bought a short wigs. Because I want to change my image.And today I reserved and wore it. After wearing, I took some selfies and put them on my social networking. Most of my friends were surprised to this. But they all appreciated with my new image. The funny thing is that before my mother have made a dream that I cut off my long hairs. Then she told me I was not good looking. Few hours later, I told my friends the truth, they were tricked. Haha!

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A little trick

My hair (the word 'hair', when talking about all the hair on your head, is uncountable)is too long. It nearly reaches my waist. I have wore had like this for many years. A week ago, I bought a short wigs because I want to change my image. And Today I reserved and wore it.  plucked up the courage to wear it. (I'm not too sure what you wanted to say here, but this phrase 'plucked up the courage' means that you became brave enough to wear the wig)After While wearing it, I took some selfies and put them on my social networking profiles. Most of my friends were surprised to at (we always use the preposition 'at' or 'by' with 'surprised)this, but they all appreciated with my new image. The funny thing is that before my mother have made a dream had already dreamt (using the word 'before' makes the sentence quite confusing here.  Using 'had' [past perfect tense] is a good way to give the information that something happened before) that I would (would is used to talk about the future looking forward from the past)cut off my long hairs. Then she told me I was not good looking. A few hours later, I told my friends the truth; they were had been tricked. Haha!

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