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Such a Nice Day

I made plans with my friend who I'd stayed with during high school, when I studied abroad. It's ("It's" is a little bit better because this is a casual anecdote) crazy that the last time we said "goodbye" was 6 years ago! I didn't expect I would hang out with her again in Tasmania. She's become such a great, beautiful woman. I got up early for breakfast, and she drove me (どこに？). It took more than an hour, but we had a good time on the way. The air was fresh, and I could feel nature when I opened the window. She My friend (Too many "she" = not good) took me to a great cafe where I had my best breakfast in Australia. We talked about many things since we hadn't met seen each other in such a long time, and we compared notes about Australian and Japanese society. After that, we went for a walk and I bought a bottle of fresh juice and a pair of hand-made earrings. They were quite lovely. Oh, and I also bought a full bag of apples for just 3 dollars. I got home around lunchtime, but I was so full that I didn't have any lunch. Afterwards, I watched a movie about a woman who had terminal cancer. It was a great story (Cancerは"great"ですか！？）. After that, my roommates and I went to a Korean BBQ restaurant. Although we loved it there, all of us had been so hungry that we ordered too much, so we ended up taking a lot of food home. We had a great time at dinner. I love my friends and Korean food so much. Thanks, guys.

Great job, Mizuki.　文法は本当に上手です。