my last swimming course This semester, I choose a swimming course. I could certainly told you it is my most regretful things I did. Because it's too cold! Could you image someone swims in winter? Alth

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my last swimming course This semester, I choose a swimming course. I could certainly told you it is my most regretful things I did. Because it's too cold! Could you image someone swims in winter? Although the swimming poor has constant temperature, it was about 22 degrees Celsius. I chose this course with my roommates together. However, I have learn breast stroke at about 11 years old so that I can swim. The reason I chose is that I can get excellent marks to improve my GPA. Today, we had the last class to examine. There is no doubt that I got full mark. My roommates didn't learn totally, and they are unskilled,so they got 90 or 85 points. I still have one elective gymnastic course to choose next semester.

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my last swimming course

This semester, I choose a swimming course. (you don't need the comma since the sentence is short)

This semester I have chosen a swimming course. (use the present perfect, have chosen, since the action is in the past, but it has a relationship to the present).http://www.perfect-english-grammar.com/present-perfect-use.html

I could can certainly told you it is my most regretful things I did. Because it's too cold!

I can centainrly tell you it is the most regretful thing I did because it's too cold!

If you use, I could, then is like saying, I can tell you, but maybe not. But you're already telling it, so, use, can.

Could Can you image someone swims swimming in the winter?

Although, the swimming pool has a constant temperature , it was about of 22 degrees Celsius.

I chose this course with my roommates together. More natural, I chose this course together with my roommates.

However I have learn learned breast stroke at about 11 years old so that I can swim.

However, I learned how to swim when I was 11 years old, and back then I also learn how to breast stroke.

The reason I chose swimming is so that I can get excellent marks to improve my GPA.

Today, we had the last class to examine.

Today we had the last test.

There is no doubt that I got full marks. My roommates didn't learn totally learn, and they are unskilled, so they (probably) got 90 or 85 points. I still have one elective gymnastic course to choose next semester.

My last swimming course

This semester, I choose a swimming course. I can could certainly tell told you it was is my worst decision, most regretful things I did. because it's so too cold! Could Can you image someone swimming in winter? Although It was cold even though the swimming pool has a constant temperature, it was of about 22 degrees Celsius, I chose this course with my roommates together. However, I have learnt breast stroke when I was at about 11 years old so that I could can swim. The reason I chose the course is that I can get excellent marks to improve my GPA. Today, we had the last class with a test to examine. There is no doubt that I got full marks. My roommates didn't learn completely totally, and they are unskilled, so they got 90 or 85 points. I still have one elective gymnastic course to choose next semester.

my last swimming course

This semester, I choose a swimming course. I could certainly will told tell you that it is one my of the most regretful things I've ever did done. Because it's too cold! Could you image someone swimmings in winter? Although the swimming poor has a constant temperature, it was about 22 degrees Celsius. I chose this course with my roommates together. However, I have learned breast stroke at about 11 years old so that I can could swim. The reason I chose it is so that I can get excellent marks to improve my GPA. Today, we had were the last class to be examined. There is no doubt that I got full marks. My roommates didn't learn totally much, and they are unskilled ,so they got 90 or 85 points. I still have one elective gymnastic course to choose next semester.

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