Chapecoense - Plane crash
Yesterday there was one of the worst sports accidents in my country. The plane crashed into Colombia,
30 km away from Medelin, killing one of the most friendly teams in Brazil.
This young club was growing very fast and each more winning games .... they were in the first international final.
In my country, people did not believe this news. It seemed like a nightmare, but one of the good things about it all
is solidarity everywhere.
I really hope that the team will recover as soon as possible, but this will never be forgotten. At this moment
we should think about how fragile our life is and thank each day.
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Chapecoense - Plane crash
Yesterday there was one of the worst sports accidents in my country. A plane crashed in Colombia,30 km away from Medellin, killing one of the friendliest teams in Brazil.
This young club was growing very fast and each time winning more games .... they were in the first international final.
In my country, people did not believe this news. It seemed like a nightmare, but one of the good things about it all
is the solidarity everywhere.
I really hope that the team will recover as soon as possible, but this will never be forgotten. At this moment
we should think about how fragile our life is and be thankful for each day.
Hello Wagner,
Such terrible news, there were several notebooks written yesterday on this theme. It was reported worldwide, so people all round the world know of and understand this tragedy.
Just a few small corrections. In the first line you should use 'a' because the plane is one of many. If you talk about this plane later, then you use 'the' because it is already introduced.
As yesterday my thoughts are with everyone who has been affected by this crash.
Bob
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