The life in countryside
Last Monday I went to visit a client. He lives in a small town called "Carapungo de Amaguaña".
Althought the town is near the city center, the atmosphere is completely different. If you see around, there are only trees, animals and agricultural crops.
Also, there were no cars noise, and it's possible to listen to the birds singing.
The client said that in that place there are no delinquency. If an unknown person arrives there, all the people are watching what he is doing, they ask him why he is there and if required, they ask to unknow person leaves the town.
I liked the tranquility in this town.
I would like to live in the countryside someday.
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The life in countryside [0]
Last Monday I went to visit a client. He lives in a small town called "Carapungo de Amaguaña".Althought the town is near the city center, the atmosphere is completely different. If you see look around [1], there are only trees, animals and agricultural crops.
Also, there were was no cars noise [2], and it's possible to listen to the birds singing.
The client said that in that place there are is no delinquency. If an unknown person arrives there, all the people are watching what he is doing, they ask him why he is there and if required, they ask to the unknown (~unfamiliar may be better) [3] person leaves the town.
I liked the tranquility in this town.
I would like to live in the countryside someday.
[0] The is usually omitted in titles
[1] Seeing is the result. looking is the process.
[2] In English you can use nouns as adjectives. In this case does not require plural as noise is an abstract term.
[3] Unfamiliar is a better fit.
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The life in the countryside
Last Monday I went to visit a client. He lives in a small town called "Carapungo de Amaguaña".Althought the town is near the city center, the atmosphere is completely different. If you look around, there are only trees, animals and agricultural agriculture crops.
Also, there were no cars noises, and it's was possible to listen to the birds singing.
The client said that in that place there are no delinquency do you mean no trespassers allowed or delinquents?. If an unknown person arrives there, all the people are watching what he is doing, they ask him why he is there and if required necessary , they ask to the unknow person to leave the town.
I liked the tranquility(you can also say I liked the calm atmosphere) in this town.
I would like to live in on the countryside someday.
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